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Where is Moon?

Views (111) Haiku Created on 4-2-08 Flag

This one is my favorite part, I start write haiku peom, when I was in 8th grade!




Me, little bear and
Moon are playing hide and seek.
"It is your turn."

I run and hide in
A tree. Moon's still counting on.
Moon's looking for me.

I try to peek to
See if the moon not there. I'll
Run to other trees!

But, too late! Moon caught
Me. Now it's my turn to seek.
"Moon, you go hide now."

I cover my eyes.
And say, "ten, nine,-" Moon still there.
The clouds start moving.

Clouds covered the moon,
I uncover my eyes and
Am looking for moon.

I run and seek for
Moon but not there! I guess I
Should took over there!

I saw yellowish
From the rock, I guess it was
The moon there, maybe.

I run toward that
Rock and look for yellow, but
It was a flower. Darn!

So, I walked to the
Forest and spotted again,
Yellow in the tree.

And I climbed the
Tree. And I shook it a lot!
The yellow is floating.

It is not moon, it
Was a yellow balloon. Darn!
I ask friends for help.

"Have you seen Moon?" they
Say, "no." My friends and I are
Looking for moon, now!

And I shouted, "I
Give up now! You are winner!"
The clouds start to move.

Clouds wnt away and
Was there. I say, "you are
Smarter than me, Moon."

My friends and I are
Playing hide and seek! I told
Moon, "we will play, again!"

The EnD!!

 

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On April 13th 2008 XxbloodstainxX Said :
XxbloodstainxX This is very unique, not like an average poem.
On April 10th 2008 mathstar Said :
mathstar Love this poem!!!!! Woww veryyyy goood
On April 4th 2008 xXPunkGirl09Xx Said :
xXPunkGirl09Xx man i love this poem the bestttttttttttttttt everrtrrrr! =D
On April 3rd 2008 AnimaniacAsh Said :
AnimaniacAsh I LOVED THAT POEM -Ash