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Created on 3-31-08
It shock me
when you found me
i was happy that you just talk to me
i thought i am in dream
but it not, i was amazing
that it is true life, not dream
i noticed that your action that you still like me
which it make me to happy ever.
I still miss you.
I wish that you live in here.
but i cant wait for next...
whatever if you start to talk to me
it which make me to smile
or start to flirt with you.
i cant help it.
i cant wait for something....that you didn't know.
i cant wait........
Please Login to post comments| On August 4th 2008 kfricke88 Said : | |
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very nice.love it |
| On April 26th 2008 AnimaniacAsh Said : | |
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nice one!
-Ash |
| On April 10th 2008 mathstar Said : | |
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Very goood poem I love it.
I remmeber I did post comment but what happen to it? |
| On April 3rd 2008 CSLimeWriter Said : | |
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Did you mean to keep the verb tenses like that? just wondering but it's a cool poem :)
~Marie |
