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You make me smile
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Created on 2-12-08
When i see you
it make me to smile as bright
whenever if i am sad
But you still make me to smile
If you saw me to be sad
then you would make a silly face
or give me a cute smile
which it still make me to smile
*dont say things so shit about my peom! i am not good at peom but i am good at quote so i try my best to make a peom! so thanks.*
Please Login to post comments| On April 26th 2008 AnimaniacAsh Said : | |
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that's got to be one of my fav's!
-Ash |
| On February 15th 2008 muffinbobeat48 Said : | |
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Well...I won't diss the poem...but can you please spell it "poem" and not "peom"? |
| On February 14th 2008 Babydotz Said : | |
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Good.. I agree with the rest of the comments. Your not a bad poet just need a little practice thats all... |
| On February 13th 2008 mathstar Said : | |
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definetelyyy good poem. good job |
| On February 13th 2008 Pikkakard Said : | |
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I am thinking this good be |
| On February 13th 2008 xXPunkGirl09Xx Said : | |
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Very amazing I totally love it. |
| On February 13th 2008 xXPunkGirl09Xx Said : | |
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Very amazing I totally love it. |
| On February 13th 2008 tumblegrl1994 Said : | |
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Amazing! I think it's really good! :) |
