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Views (87) Passion Created on 5-16-07 Flag

His soul creeping down her spine,

onto the floor, he stands behind,

the woman whom he thinks devine

to see, she is no longer fine.

Desolate, drowned and dreary she be.

Defined much to explicitly.

She's been forsaken casually

By he who loved and thought to leave.

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On May 16th 2007 Robyn03281989 Said :
Robyn03281989 Forsake Me, Forsake Me Not....a different side to he loves me he loves me not
On May 16th 2007 mcihellejane Said :
mcihellejane I like it but I struggle with titles myself so I have no idea there~