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Views (91) Tragedy Created on 6-25-08 Flag

 

      as she walks down the dark lonely street,

              she feels the wind pick up her feet,

                 it takes her to another world,

           one were there's no diamond or a pearl,

                  another plain where hunger is gone,

            and for that she sing's a song,

         her pain slides away as she hear's an angel's voice,

         it say's to her 'you have a choice'

           'to live or die, if live please cry, for to live we need emotion'

                   the girl pondered this notion,

       and she fought to her self the angel is right,

            why did i think to die tonight,

        for all the worlds pain, and all the worlds wheel,

              you cannot have a heart of steel,

         so she decided to live, and embrace her emotions,

              for today she put's forward another motion,

                    she say's to the world in a whisper,

                       'the secret is to feel'

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On June 30th 2008 xHickChick789x Said :
xHickChick789x Deep and it has a nice rhyme to it. Love it! Wonderful job! :)
On June 27th 2008 kissofasia Said :
kissofasia Deep and greatly written...
On June 26th 2008 criz10 Said :
criz10 Very good job
On June 26th 2008 kalenna4 Said :
kalenna4 I like its good
On June 25th 2008 onelove6fs Said :
onelove6fs woah! thats so pretty.i love the words u used.
On June 25th 2008 AirplaneMan Said :
AirplaneMan nice job I like the slow flow of the rhyme
On June 25th 2008 xX1ncINalifeXx Said :
xX1ncINalifeXx thanks :)
On June 25th 2008 Kidojidoari Said :
Kidojidoari I really liked this. It was very beautiful and meaningful~ The secret IS to feel. =] Good job.