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Why? |
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Come walk with me... |
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Was it wrong?... |
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Hidden |
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love |
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we are one? |
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see through the dark |
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mistery |
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Taken for granted |
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what was wrong? |
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sunshine |
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the magic of number two... |
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could it be? |
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Heartbeat of an angel... |
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Misery |
could it be?
as she walks down the dark lonely street,
she feels the wind pick up her feet,
it takes her to another world,
one were there's no diamond or a pearl,
another plain where hunger is gone,
and for that she sing's a song,
her pain slides away as she hear's an angel's voice,
it say's to her 'you have a choice'
'to live or die, if live please cry, for to live we need emotion'
the girl pondered this notion,
and she fought to her self the angel is right,
why did i think to die tonight,
for all the worlds pain, and all the worlds wheel,
you cannot have a heart of steel,
so she decided to live, and embrace her emotions,
for today she put's forward another motion,
she say's to the world in a whisper,
'the secret is to feel'
| On June 30th 2008 xHickChick789x Said : | |
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Deep and it has a nice rhyme to it. Love it! Wonderful job! :) |
| On June 27th 2008 kissofasia Said : | |
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Deep and greatly written... |
| On June 26th 2008 criz10 Said : | |
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Very good job |
| On June 26th 2008 kalenna4 Said : | |
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I like its good |
| On June 25th 2008 onelove6fs Said : | |
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woah! thats so pretty.i love the words u used. |
| On June 25th 2008 AirplaneMan Said : | |
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nice job I like the slow flow of the rhyme |
| On June 25th 2008 xX1ncINalifeXx Said : | |
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thanks :)
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| On June 25th 2008 Kidojidoari Said : | |
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I really liked this. It was very beautiful and meaningful~
The secret IS to feel. =]
Good job. |


