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Why? |
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Come walk with me... |
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Was it wrong?... |
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Hidden |
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love |
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we are one? |
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see through the dark |
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mistery |
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what was wrong? |
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see through the dark
for those who see through the governments lies,
for those who listen to the sufferings cries,
a world of hope? a world of enterprise?
i don't see this, i see a world of dispise,
greenpeace are the real warriors in my eyes,
there trying to comfort the sufferings cries,
they see through the dark
to those who hold there own, when everyone judges,
keep on smiling and hold no grudges,
to those who fight for there rights,
who don't like to fight,
to those who see the sky and are filled with joy,
who don't see a gun as a toy,
they see through the dark
for those who love for loves sake,
for those who don't see a difference and try to drive it with a stake,
to those who except where no one else does,
who like people just because,
to those who are just trying to make LIFE,
no matter what there trouble and strife
they see through the dark,
do you?
to be continued...
| On June 30th 2008 xHickChick789x Said : | |
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omg I must say this is really good. *2 thumbs up* |
| On June 27th 2008 kissofasia Said : | |
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wow,what a brilliant idea you have...This is really good... |
| On June 26th 2008 onelove6fs Said : | |
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awesome!I like the rymeing.it has a good point. |
| On June 26th 2008 Kidojidoari Said : | |
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I loved it. A lot of good points in it. It's all very true.
I'd like to say I see through the dark, but I might just be a hypocrite.
Good job, nevertheless. =D |
| On June 25th 2008 ddiana3 Said : | |
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i love it. it is very nicely written. great job. =) Diana |
| On June 25th 2008 StarGoddess219 Said : | |
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Great poem... : ) |


