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see through the dark

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          for those who see through the governments lies,

           for those who listen to the sufferings cries,

          a world of hope? a world of enterprise?

        i don't see this, i see a world of dispise,

          greenpeace are the real warriors in my eyes,

        there trying to comfort the sufferings cries,

          

              they see through the dark

 

          to those who hold there own, when everyone judges,

           keep on smiling and hold no grudges,

         to those who fight for there rights,

          who don't like to fight,

            to those who see the sky and are filled with joy,

              who don't see a gun as a toy,

             

            they see through the dark

 

       for those who love for loves sake,

     for those who don't see a difference and try to drive it with a stake,

         to those who except where no one else does,

         who like people just because,

        to those who are just trying to make LIFE,

       no matter what there trouble and strife

 

            they see through the dark,

 

                   do you?

 

to be continued...

            

            

          

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On June 30th 2008 xHickChick789x Said :
xHickChick789x omg I must say this is really good. *2 thumbs up*
On June 27th 2008 kissofasia Said :
kissofasia wow,what a brilliant idea you have...This is really good...
On June 26th 2008 onelove6fs Said :
onelove6fs awesome!I like the rymeing.it has a good point.
On June 26th 2008 Kidojidoari Said :
Kidojidoari I loved it. A lot of good points in it. It's all very true. I'd like to say I see through the dark, but I might just be a hypocrite. Good job, nevertheless. =D
On June 25th 2008 ddiana3 Said :
ddiana3 i love it. it is very nicely written. great job. =) Diana
On June 25th 2008 StarGoddess219 Said :
StarGoddess219 Great poem... : )