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Come walk with me... |
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Hidden
look at my face, what do you see?
anger? fear? sacrafice? that you could never forsee!
no, you see happiness beyond belief,
and you're right, i am happy, but it's only brief
they want me to run they want me to hide,
but they'll never change how i feel inside,
they caused me tragedy, they caused me pain,
they caused me to think i could never be happy again,
but guess what? you're wrong about this,
forget what you told me, i'll create my own bliss,
you will never take my free will, or my life,
even maybe someday i'll be his wife,
you tried to destroy my sanity,
but after all this time i've set my self free,
so go on about your lives, your dreams,
becuase i'm no longer ripped at the seams!!
| On June 27th 2008 christopher199 Said : | |
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very good |
| On June 25th 2008 onelove6fs Said : | |
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awesome! your an amazing poet |
| On June 25th 2008 onelove6fs Said : | |
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awesome! your an amazing poet |
| On June 25th 2008 ddiana3 Said : | |
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i love it. it is an awsome poem. it rhymes perfectly. great job. =) Diana |
| On June 25th 2008 kalenna4 Said : | |
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That is good |
| On June 25th 2008 101091 Said : | |
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Amazing. This is so powerful. I love the rhythm and rhyming in it. Excellent job. |
| On June 25th 2008 criz10 Said : | |
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Loved it |
| On June 25th 2008 Kidojidoari Said : | |
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I like the passion in the poem, which goes along with the rhyming and the rhythm thus created.
It's like something I've felt before. :]
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| On June 25th 2008 kissofasia Said : | |
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i love how you it rymes....Are you okay?Just to let you know,you can talk to me.I'm here to listen... |


