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Help Me Believe
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Created on 9-2-08
Help Me Believe
By: xHickChick789x
I'm lost
I have no idea where this is going
It's like I'm missing, with no way out
It surprises me to find out,
You were the only one there for me
Now that's just strange...
Baby, I messed up,
Just help me believe
I've gone so far to tell you this
And you weren't there by my side
You're the only one that's on my mind right now
So baby please, help me believe
I'm gone
You have no idea how much pain I'm in
I keep kicking myself, until I'm brittle
Surprisingly, you end up showing me a thing or two
Some thing that made us grow close,
But now we've slowly drifted apart...
Baby, I messed up,
Just help me believe
I've gone so far to tell you this
And you were there by my side
You're the only one that's on my mind right now
So baby please, help me believe
I'm sick and tired of you not here with me
Hopefully, I'll be with you soon,
And you'll understand how much love means to me
So help me believe, where ever you are...
(Repeat Chorus Twice)
Created on: 9/2/08 (Note: I know this one has some some parts that needs edited, but I'm sorry about that. Also, for those that are reading my story Teardrops on My Guitar, this is the song that will be in the story that the band plays. Enjoy and I don't mind criticism.)
Please Login to post comments| On September 15th 2008 brokenScArLeT Said : | |
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wow thts beautiful=)) i w2ish i could write like u lol =)) |
| On September 13th 2008 xXXxjuicyxXxXX Said : | |
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love it, as always. Your very good at writing lyrics, i wish i could be half as good as you. :] |
| On September 8th 2008 specialk107 Said : | |
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good, realy realy good, thats all i can say, grate job |
| On September 7th 2008 tinaangel17 Said : | |
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That sounds like a really good song! I wish I knew what it sounded like |
| On September 7th 2008 KinkyKyla Said : | |
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dude i want to here this song
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| On September 7th 2008 xoxnishaoxo Said : | |
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dnt tht the one u love go away i knw how u feel but its nt ur fault if he wasnts u then he will come around nt right then and nw but soon if there was chemisty between u then u will always be together. |
| On September 4th 2008 afunkysippycup Said : | |
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it sounds wistful. or like somethings was lost. good work on showing emotion! |
| On September 3rd 2008 mypoeticrage Said : | |
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havent read the story, i like the lyrics though |
| On September 3rd 2008 ChristieSaya Said : | |
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I really want to hear this song! |
| On September 3rd 2008 101091 Said : | |
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I really like it. |
| On September 2nd 2008 mydragonlord Said : | |
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this is really good!! would love to hear it on the radio soon. |
| On September 2nd 2008 xXPunkGirl09Xx Said : | |
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Aww honesty I totally love this song! It is beautiful song! I can't wait to read your story! :D |
| On September 2nd 2008 lalarubio23 Said : | |
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great job, i can sing it right now its that good. =) |
| On September 2nd 2008 jamabu Said : | |
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fantasic job!!!! |
| On September 2nd 2008 Exavolt1 Said : | |
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Wow......i can relate to this right now lol......Good Job |
| On September 2nd 2008 lovedaisy Said : | |
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wow i was nearly in tears |
| On September 2nd 2008 XxBubblyBabexX Said : | |
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i like it
very good |
| On September 2nd 2008 mymyspacesux Said : | |
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awsome!!! |
| On September 2nd 2008 muse4apoem Said : | |
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Preety good. :) |
| On September 2nd 2008 kissofasia Said : | |
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i love this a lot.... |
| On September 2nd 2008 mitchy8125 Said : | |
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Yeah, it's really good |
| On September 2nd 2008 gonzo4201 Said : | |
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Nice Song, can definitely relate to it... |
