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You're on My Nerves Lately
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Created on 8-28-08
You're on My Nerves Lately
By: xHickChick789x
I'm not sure, why you are acting like this
We were always friends till the end,
But something just made everything go down hill...
Every day it's nothing but silence between us
Every time I worry we won't talk again
Girl, I'm not sure what your problem is,
But you're on my nerves lately
I don't understand why it has to be like this
I never thought it would go this far,
But you really made life hell...
Every mile seems to fade between us
Every hour just flies by without you
Girl, I don't know what is up with you,
But you're on my nerves lately
I can't risk losing our friendship,
But if you're going to act like this,
I won't even care anymore...
Every day it's nothing but silence between us Every time I worry we won't talk again Every mile seems to fade between us Every hour just flies by without you Girl, I don't know what is up with you, But you're on my nerves lately
Created on: 8/28/08
(Note: This is about a close friend of mine who just came out of no where an just doesn't acknowledge me anymore.)
Please Login to post comments| On September 2nd 2008 kissofasia Said : | |
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Good luck and i hope you'll get over this soon.You are gonna be okay |
| On August 30th 2008 KinkyKyla Said : | |
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grl i know how u feel but my ex bf lives with me now & hes very annoying!
& now im way over him |
| On August 30th 2008 mymyspacesux Said : | |
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eh nice!! |
| On August 30th 2008 xXPunkGirl09Xx Said : | |
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Wow, I can relate this poem. I used to feel that feelings with my ex friend, but I am sorry about what happens. I am sure that you will be okay. |
| On August 30th 2008 XxBubblyBabexX Said : | |
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dang i dont read poems often on here but your a really good writer and i think ill start |
| On August 30th 2008 xoxnishaoxo Said : | |
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who was tht person tht was going on ur neavous because i feel the same way about someone lol |
| On August 30th 2008 ChristieSaya Said : | |
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nice! |
| On August 29th 2008 poemprincess Said : | |
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Haha I know this feeling lol... |
| On August 29th 2008 FireAngel420 Said : | |
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I like it, and it is deffinatly something that alot of people can relate to great job |
| On August 29th 2008 XxXastinXxX Said : | |
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wow amazing!! :]] |
| On August 29th 2008 albanianvukaj Said : | |
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i really like thid poem.. its really good. i kno the feeling. before school ended, we were inseperable, but then the new year started and they flat out ignore me now |
| On August 29th 2008 UnSane420 Said : | |
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this is really good i like the flow of it the lines fit very nicely together you did awesome on it good work!! |
| On August 29th 2008 popopoas Said : | |
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This is exactly how I feel like with a friend who seems to be fadin away from me. I can totally relate to this. I think maybe if you put this with a really catchy and sad tune, it'll be a hit; a change from all those love-sick songs, and something everyone can relate to. good job! Keep it up :) |
| On August 29th 2008 sixtiespixie Said : | |
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I like it. :) |
| On August 29th 2008 afunkysippycup Said : | |
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nice |
| On August 29th 2008 xXXxjuicyxXxXX Said : | |
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This is great. and sad cuz its always sad when friendshiops don't work, anyway good job! |
| On August 28th 2008 mydragonlord Said : | |
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so sad when friends go seperate ways. Your poem expresed your felling nicly, well done! |
| On August 28th 2008 muse4apoem Said : | |
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*and *only |
| On August 28th 2008 muse4apoem Said : | |
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I have had this happen to me before! She flat out told me never to talk to her again! I was seven years old anf she was my old friend at the time! :( |
| On August 28th 2008 rialjim Said : | |
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THIS POEM WAS CHARMING AS WELL AS TOUCHING. |
| On August 28th 2008 nickynicole901 Said : | |
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wow..i love this..and ive gone through it :/ |
| On August 28th 2008 hollistechik08 Said : | |
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oh wow this is sad i kno how you feel! =[ =] |
| On August 28th 2008 counterpart Said : | |
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i love it. but it is sad |
| On August 28th 2008 Andy2Anomaly Said : | |
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Oh wow. I'm speechless. This is amazing. :D |
| On August 28th 2008 Exavolt1 Said : | |
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I love your poems,expesially this 1......good work! |
