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Someday

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Someday

By: xHickChick789x

 

Sometimes I'd rather lie around,

Looking for that road I wish to discover,

Hoping all my dreams could come true

Maybe I'll be blessed  to find that one,

The one that'll be there, in every minute of my life

Someday you'll recognize

Someday you'll see what I mean

Someday, maybe not now,

But one day you'll find out how it feels

To be broken into a million tiny pieces

Once I got older, I got wiser

I learned how life can be hell,

But when you realize the hardships it has,

There are choices you need to make,

But will you make the right one?

Someday you will know who to desire

Someday it won't be that simple

Someday, someway 

Someday you'll find out how it feels,

To leave the bitter ashes, scattered on the floor

Right now, I value a few facts now,

But I'm young and still learning,

How to pray, to love, to trust, to bend…

It's working its way to the top,

But not to pixel perfect way

Someday you'll understand, why I wrote this

Someday you might thank me, for showing you new things

Someday you could be famous and forget you even knew me

Someday, just someday, you may think back to I was today

And recognize that I wasn't lying at all

Created on: 6/25/08

 

NOTE: This was just some thing that popped into my head, so it might not be the best. It's more to the people that haven't been through a break up or really haven't experienced the challenges in life yet. Tell me what you think of it anyways. Btw I will not be on here posting anything from tomorrow to July 7th because I will be on vacation. So I'll write more when I come back. Thank you 4 all the support!
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On October 4th 2008 girlzrock2008 Said :
girlzrock2008 u lil @%&$! u took the poem off of girlzrock!!!
On August 29th 2008 crazygirl2313 Said :
crazygirl2313 I love this, it's really good!!!!!
On August 4th 2008 Alli684 Said :
Alli684 Love it!!
On July 24th 2008 poemprincess Said :
poemprincess Love it :)
On July 10th 2008 UnSane420 Said :
UnSane420 this is aweosme i love it
On July 1st 2008 11Dreamgirl11 Said :
11Dreamgirl11 iI LUV IT!! I LUV THE EMOTION TOO!!
On July 1st 2008 nickynicole901 Said :
nickynicole901 i love it.. :]
On July 1st 2008 nickynicole901 Said :
nickynicole901 i love it.. :]
On July 1st 2008 gotmilk1994 Said :
gotmilk1994 this one is one of my favorites of your poetry. one of many i might say!!! amazing =]
On June 30th 2008 nlis2kool Said :
nlis2kool luvz it!!!
On June 29th 2008 smile4evr Said :
smile4evr deep...i ♥♥♥ it!! keep it up ur an amazing writer!!
On June 29th 2008 seekerovtruth Said :
seekerovtruth I think you did a great job with this. It's actually one of my favorites.
On June 28th 2008 orangefizzpop Said :
orangefizzpop I really really agree with calypso, that this poem is chock full of different aspects that makes a person think. Awesome job!
On June 27th 2008 Calypso32 Said :
Calypso32 Your imagery and profundity is actually suprising, whether you meant to or not, you've crafted many, many layers into this one short poem and one can read it over and over and get something new each time. It takes a certain touch to acquire that kind of clarity and you've certaintly got a knack for it. Keep it up.~L
On June 27th 2008 mydragonlord Said :
mydragonlord This was Brilliant, stunning, wonerfull, thought provoking and well Brilliant my favirite lie was: How to pray, to love, to trust, to bend…
On June 26th 2008 takemywings Said :
takemywings That is absolutely amazing! Great job!! I really like it... :D
On June 26th 2008 sheiza23 Said :
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wow naman an nicee nito.. love it.. gawa kapa
On June 26th 2008 icsgrad07 Said :
icsgrad07 i love it. again ur such a writer. love ur peoms
On June 26th 2008 HannieJo Said :
HannieJo woww... I'm sure I've said that before about something you've written. I'M SUCH A HUGE FAN!!!
On June 25th 2008 chickenbroth Said :
chickenbroth well done.
On June 25th 2008 Angel2k11 Said :
Angel2k11 i loved it......I felt like you someone who was learning from your experience....this is a beautiful poem....like i said ILOVEDIT!! you are really really good at poetry...=D
On June 25th 2008 kassie94 Said :
kassie94 it's really good dont worry alot of my poems just pop in my head in my opinion those r the best ones if u think about it to much it usually sucks
On June 25th 2008 onelove6fs Said :
onelove6fs soo cool...
On June 25th 2008 Thugnastay227 Said :
Thugnastay227 no worries...this is good. very good in fact.
On June 25th 2008 xXPunkGirl09Xx Said :
xXPunkGirl09Xx NO, this is my absolutely favorite poem! I totally love it! This is EXACTLY how I feel! I love it a lot! ♥♥