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Because of You
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Created on 6-17-08
Because of You
By: xHickChick789x
Looking for a road,
As I stand in the rain
I feel like my world is over
Once I hear your name,
I smile and realize,
How much we missed out
Because of you, I'd be
In a better place by your side
Because of you, I learned to believe
And it wasn't easy
Because of you, I could make it through life,
But I don't know if I can now
Before I had found you,
I was loveless and heartbroken
Since you are gone,
There really isn't anything I can do
Thinking and reminsing hurts me most
Now I notice what I didn't know before
Because of you, I'd be
In a better place by your side
Because of you, I learned to believe,
And it wasn't easy
Because of you, I could make it through life,
But I don't know if I can now
I toss and turn at night,
Knowing that you aren't here to see me
You'll always be in my heart
Even if I may never see you again
You mean the world to me
Cuz everthing you showed me was...
Because of you
Created on: 6/17/08
NOTE: Don't think of this as a break-up poem, think of it as if you lost someone in war, or someone very close to you like a friend of a family member that you cared for all your life. This poem goes out to everyone.
Please Login to post comments| On June 30th 2008 berkoff62 Said : | |
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hey its great, the loneliness the rain the mellancolic i just love it |
| On June 29th 2008 nlis2kool Said : | |
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You always write great no matter what it is.... |
| On June 22nd 2008 sixtiesdoll Said : | |
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I love the first stanza. Nice :) |
| On June 21st 2008 vampirefreak61 Said : | |
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i love it |
| On June 21st 2008 gotmilk1994 Said : | |
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i like how you dedicated it to everyone EVEN ANIMALS!!! |
| On June 19th 2008 orangefizzpop Said : | |
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a very good "because of you" poem :) I love it alot! |
| On June 18th 2008 TheBranster Said : | |
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why thank you |
| On June 18th 2008 xHickChick789x Said : | |
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aww... wow you guys are making me all cry. And to avder: RIP Uncle James :) I feel so bad :'( |
| On June 18th 2008 xXPunkGirl09Xx Said : | |
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That was beautiful poem i love it alot! it is very actually touching my heart! ♥ |
| On June 18th 2008 smile4evr Said : | |
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this id great!! i ♥ it!! |
| On June 17th 2008 kissofasia Said : | |
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ohhh it makes me sad.lol but you did a great job...loved it |
| On June 17th 2008 jaylynn142434 Said : | |
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aww this is soo sweet! very good job. |
| On June 17th 2008 icsgrad07 Said : | |
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i love it, ur poems are amazing! |
| On June 17th 2008 disneyfan12 Said : | |
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that was very good! ♥ |
| On June 17th 2008 N5607 Said : | |
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great |
| On June 17th 2008 FireAngel420 Said : | |
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that was beautiful and something that pretty much everyone can relate to great work |
| On June 17th 2008 Andy2Anomaly Said : | |
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This was very good. |
| On June 17th 2008 Thugnastay227 Said : | |
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how can one as young as you speak with such experience. hmmmm intriguing. |
| On June 17th 2008 muse4apoem Said : | |
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That preety good. I like it! :) |
| On June 17th 2008 LovisaJoy Said : | |
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GEEEEEEEEEZZZZ! i love this...i didn't cry though. sorry...i havn't lost anyone really...unless you count animals...anywho! it was exelant...
P.S. animals do count...they're part of the family! |
| On June 17th 2008 ReneakaKC Said : | |
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BEAUTIFUL!!! |
| On June 17th 2008 avder Said : | |
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Wow. I was crying because I was thinking of my uncle the whole time. RIP Uncle James! |
| On June 17th 2008 huntzoey Said : | |
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WOW!! what is the cry symbol? |
| On June 17th 2008 PorshaS Said : | |
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THAT WAS GOOD |
| On June 17th 2008 gonzo4201 Said : | |
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very good, but very sad, nicely done |
