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My Last Call

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My Last Call

 By: xHickChick789x  

I pick up the phone,

And start to dial his number,

But all I get is his answering machine

I sigh as a tear falls down my cheek

I wasn't suprised

 

"Hey it's me

I really missed you

It's been a long time,

I don't wanna let you go

Call me back if you want a second chance,

Or this might be my last call I make."

 

I hang up the phone,

As it fell out of my hands

I cover my face and cry for life

I don't wanna lose him

But I'm afraid I have...

 

"Hey it's me

I really missed you

It's been a long time,

I don't wanna let you go

Call me back it you wanna second chance,

Or this might be my last call I make."

 

I couldn't believe that this could happen

I wanted to die, or kill myself

But then I heard the phone ring

I knew it was him,

So I just let it ring...

 

"Hey babe it's me

I missed you too

It's been a while I know,

But I don't want a second chance,

I've already moved on

I'm afraid this is going to be my last call."

 

I frowned bigger than ever

I was more miserble

I blurted out "Why?"

I couldn't take it anymore

Needless to say, that was my last call.

 

Created on: 6/10/08

 

NOTE: This isn't true, but I was tempted to call him. Never had the guts to. Please enjoy though.

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On July 10th 2008 UnSane420 Said :
UnSane420 i love it sorry it took me a while i havent been able to make it to a computer but this is awesome!!!!!!!!
On June 24th 2008 smile4evr Said :
smile4evr this is so sweet and i can feel ur pain!! love it adn hang in there!!
On June 23rd 2008 sixtiesdoll Said :
sixtiesdoll That's sad kind-of~ I like this poem though~ It's one of your best in my eyes. Nice job! :)
On June 19th 2008 orangefizzpop Said :
orangefizzpop awwwww.. :( I'm really sorry!!
On June 17th 2008 FireAngel420 Said :
FireAngel420 that was so sad but it was a great poem
On June 17th 2008 xHickChick789x Said :
xHickChick789x
A New Poem: Because of You Check it out whenever you have time. Thank you!!
On June 16th 2008 poemprincess Said :
poemprincess Wow that was really good :) Keep up the good work :)
On June 15th 2008 gotmilk1994 Said :
gotmilk1994 awwwwww, sad!!! :(
On June 15th 2008 countrymana Said :
countrymana awww. good job
On June 14th 2008 AnaAlicia07 Said :
AnaAlicia07 god job on this one...i liked it ........♥........
On June 12th 2008 jaylynn142434 Said :
jaylynn142434 awww thats sad! very good job tho.
On June 11th 2008 vampirefreak61 Said :
vampirefreak61 interesting
On June 11th 2008 muse4apoem Said :
muse4apoem This is a real unique poem. I love it for that. This is one of my favorites from you. I really like how you ended it. Even if it's so VERY sad! There is plenty of better men to choose from. Keep that in mind! :)
On June 10th 2008 berkoff62 Said :
berkoff62 heu its well elaborated, i really like it, a really sad situation though, expresses a small despair and hope is sad and really great
On June 10th 2008 innersmiff Said :
innersmiff ENJOY?? tell me what is there to be enjoyed
On June 10th 2008 nlis2kool Said :
nlis2kool That was GREAT I loved it.....KMP
On June 10th 2008 ReneakaKC Said :
ReneakaKC Truly touching. wow... this made me think... alot... great work tho.
On June 10th 2008 N5607 Said :
N5607 awwww! :-(
On June 10th 2008 smile4evr Said :
smile4evr i L.O.V.E. this!!
On June 10th 2008 Gigglez200969 Said :
Gigglez200969 omg this was very sad but it was good
On June 10th 2008 moosegurl01 Said :
moosegurl01 awww..sad
On June 10th 2008 Thugnastay227 Said :
Thugnastay227 wow....better than it should lol *kidding* great poem
On June 10th 2008 morbidangel585 Said :
morbidangel585 awww i loved this one
On June 10th 2008 PorshaS Said :
PorshaS aww
On June 10th 2008 XxCloudyEyesxX Said :
XxCloudyEyesxX hmm, definately made me think...