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My Last Call
My Last Call
By: xHickChick789x
I pick up the phone,
And start to dial his number,
But all I get is his answering machine
I sigh as a tear falls down my cheek
I wasn't suprised
"Hey it's me
I really missed you
It's been a long time,
I don't wanna let you go
Call me back if you want a second chance,
Or this might be my last call I make."
I hang up the phone,
As it fell out of my hands
I cover my face and cry for life
I don't wanna lose him
But I'm afraid I have...
"Hey it's me
I really missed you
It's been a long time,
I don't wanna let you go
Call me back it you wanna second chance,
Or this might be my last call I make."
I couldn't believe that this could happen
I wanted to die, or kill myself
But then I heard the phone ring
I knew it was him,
So I just let it ring...
"Hey babe it's me
I missed you too
It's been a while I know,
But I don't want a second chance,
I've already moved on
I'm afraid this is going to be my last call."
I frowned bigger than ever
I was more miserble
I blurted out "Why?"
I couldn't take it anymore
Needless to say, that was my last call.
Created on: 6/10/08
NOTE: This isn't true, but I was tempted to call him. Never had the guts to. Please enjoy though.
| On July 10th 2008 UnSane420 Said : | |
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i love it sorry it took me a while i havent been able to make it to a computer but this is awesome!!!!!!!! |
| On June 24th 2008 smile4evr Said : | |
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this is so sweet and i can feel ur pain!! love it adn hang in there!! |
| On June 23rd 2008 sixtiesdoll Said : | |
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That's sad kind-of~ I like this poem though~ It's one of your best in my eyes. Nice job! :) |
| On June 19th 2008 orangefizzpop Said : | |
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awwwww.. :( I'm really sorry!! |
| On June 17th 2008 FireAngel420 Said : | |
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that was so sad but it was a great poem |
| On June 17th 2008 xHickChick789x Said : | |
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| On June 16th 2008 poemprincess Said : | |
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Wow that was really good :) Keep up the good work :) |
| On June 15th 2008 gotmilk1994 Said : | |
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awwwwww, sad!!! :( |
| On June 15th 2008 countrymana Said : | |
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awww. good job |
| On June 14th 2008 AnaAlicia07 Said : | |
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god job on this one...i liked it ........♥........ |
| On June 12th 2008 jaylynn142434 Said : | |
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awww thats sad! very good job tho. |
| On June 11th 2008 vampirefreak61 Said : | |
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interesting |
| On June 11th 2008 muse4apoem Said : | |
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This is a real unique poem. I love it for that. This is one of my favorites from you. I really like how you ended it. Even if it's so VERY sad! There is plenty of better men to choose from. Keep that in mind! :) |
| On June 10th 2008 berkoff62 Said : | |
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heu its well elaborated, i really like it, a really sad situation though, expresses a small despair and hope is sad and really great |
| On June 10th 2008 innersmiff Said : | |
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ENJOY?? tell me what is there to be enjoyed |
| On June 10th 2008 nlis2kool Said : | |
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That was GREAT I loved it.....KMP |
| On June 10th 2008 ReneakaKC Said : | |
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Truly touching. wow... this made me think... alot... great work tho. |
| On June 10th 2008 N5607 Said : | |
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awwww! :-( |
| On June 10th 2008 smile4evr Said : | |
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i L.O.V.E. this!! |
| On June 10th 2008 Gigglez200969 Said : | |
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omg this was very sad but it was good |
| On June 10th 2008 moosegurl01 Said : | |
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awww..sad |
| On June 10th 2008 Thugnastay227 Said : | |
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wow....better than it should lol *kidding* great poem |
| On June 10th 2008 morbidangel585 Said : | |
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awww i loved this one |
| On June 10th 2008 PorshaS Said : | |
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aww |
| On June 10th 2008 XxCloudyEyesxX Said : | |
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hmm, definately made me think... |


