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I'm Done
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Created on 6-5-08
I'm Done
By: xHickChick789x
I don't know if I should give up,
Or just find someone better
Love's just too hard for me
I don't think I can catch it
I could be done
When I sit down and think back,
I see my past with the ones I love
All of them broke my heart
And left me all alone
I'm probably better off as a memory,
Than to search for true love again
Sometimes I can't imagine,
What life would be like if I was in love again
Would it turn out putting me in the same pain,
And agony as it did before?
Or could this be the end?
Well I'm tired of being the odd one
I've loved someone for a long time,
And they ended up moving on without me
I guess I'm done with love
Should I move on?
Should I give love another chance?
Does love even exist?
Why should I ask so many questions,
If I'm done?
I'm offically done
And over with this
I'm sorry, but I'm done
And I'm better off as a memory
Created on: 6/5/08
(NOTE: This was from few weeks back when I didn't know what to decide on. I've given love a second chance, but the next one the screws it up, I'm done. Plz tell me what you think. Thanks!)
Please Login to post comments| On July 14th 2008 mydragonlord Said : | |
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I really liked this one! but never give up on love and dont go looking for love, let it find you! |
| On June 20th 2008 flawlesslove13 Said : | |
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love it. :D |
| On June 13th 2008 drummajorpod Said : | |
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I don't think you should give up on love. Give up on any lover/boyfriend/whatever you want. But don't give up on the concept of love.. as the hope of it is oftentimes the only thing that gets us through. |
| On June 9th 2008 LovisaJoy Said : | |
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i'm done with love as well. what's the point in giving your heart away if all it gets you is a peace of your heart missing and pain? |
| On June 8th 2008 gonzo4201 Said : | |
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Sometimes I feel like love is oftentimes overrated, very well done, but you should never give up on love, no matter how hard it seems, true love is out there, just sometimes it is harder to find, no matter how close it may be |
| On June 8th 2008 ruskiya Said : | |
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really like the poem!! and never give up on love.. it's true!!! |
| On June 7th 2008 orangefizzpop Said : | |
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Don't give up on love, ever. If it's the last thing you do, hold on, because love will find it's way, slowly but surely. GOod poem though, I know how it feels, but just because it did't work a few times doesn't mean it's not going to work forever. |
| On June 6th 2008 gotmilk1994 Said : | |
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Nice work, i always love to read your poems, they're easy to relate to =] |
| On June 6th 2008 UnSane420 Said : | |
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this is aweosme and i agree you should give love a second chance but after that you shouldnt just go looking for love or you'll never find it you have to let it find you... but awesome poem i loved it |
| On June 6th 2008 N5607 Said : | |
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wow |
| On June 6th 2008 ReneakaKC Said : | |
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This is truly touching. I'm glad you've given love a second chance. It's the most wonderful feeling of all. ♥ |
| On June 6th 2008 specialk107 Said : | |
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anther grate poem, but i only wish you would have poste htis when you made it, but i understand why you did, thoe i dont realy know, lol, but still grate work |
| On June 6th 2008 Thugnastay227 Said : | |
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wow sounds like my darker poems and blogs so naturaly understand this feeling. be strong and i know it's hard. as always i speak from experience so i know....Huggles |
| On June 5th 2008 pjjustin Said : | |
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great as usual an untapped talent realeased into this beautiful world simply amazing great job! |
| On June 5th 2008 muse4apoem Said : | |
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I like it. :) |
| On June 5th 2008 icsgrad07 Said : | |
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YUP I FEEL THE SME WAY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! |
| On June 5th 2008 tiffany1058 Said : | |
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i see where ur coming from i got screwed over by the guy i love and thought there could be no other till i meet my current boyfriend and i too had 2 give love a second chance and i would die if he broke my heart very good poem KMP |
| On June 5th 2008 smile4evr Said : | |
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love love love it!! oh and i gave my x bf a 3rd chance and he broke my heart once again!! 2nd is fine 3rd is a no-no just like kissofasia said! |
| On June 5th 2008 nlis2kool Said : | |
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NICE |
| On June 5th 2008 vampirefreak61 Said : | |
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thats sad, i really hope its not meaning your done with living. things happen for a reason |
| On June 5th 2008 countrymana Said : | |
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its really good and i like how you wrote the different verses like that. XD |
| On June 5th 2008 AnaAlicia07 Said : | |
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NICE JOB .... I LIKE IT... KEEP UP THE GOOD WORK......♥...... |
| On June 5th 2008 kissofasia Said : | |
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i like it a lot and yes love deserve a second chance but no third chance.okay? lol |
| On June 5th 2008 chickenbroth Said : | |
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Nice job, as usual. |
| On June 5th 2008 covey10000 Said : | |
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This is Good |
