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Moved On
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Created on 5-31-08
Moved On
By: xHickChick789x
I've been through a lot of stress
And it's all because of him
But you know what, I moved on
And I don't plan to turn back
Not anytime soon anyway
Hold on,
Ready or not,
I'm going home
Free from stress
Because I've moved on
My life went wrong from the start
And now it's time for a change
Now that I left him,
There's more to look forward to
Since I had moved on
Created on: 5/31/08
Please Login to post comments| On June 13th 2008 drummajorpod Said : | |
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I wish I could move on as completely as you did. Excellent work! |
| On June 6th 2008 UnSane420 Said : | |
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awesome i love it! |
| On June 4th 2008 poemprincess Said : | |
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:) |
| On June 3rd 2008 specialk107 Said : | |
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another grate poem, |
| On June 3rd 2008 sixtiesdoll Said : | |
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Good job~ Yay for moving on too! :) |
| On June 3rd 2008 vampirefreak61 Said : | |
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lovey, nice job |
| On June 3rd 2008 ruskiya Said : | |
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i really like this poeam! |
| On June 2nd 2008 LovisaJoy Said : | |
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NICENESS!!!!!! LOVED IT! |
| On June 2nd 2008 countrymana Said : | |
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this is really good and easy to relate to :) |
| On June 1st 2008 orangefizzpop Said : | |
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Life is better spending it without someone who isn't worth your troubles ! Good job! |
| On June 1st 2008 Omniton Said : | |
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I'm glad you were able to move on. I hope you can find some one else, some one that will make you happy. Keep up the good work! |
| On June 1st 2008 thuhchris Said : | |
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Very good job |
| On June 1st 2008 smile4evr Said : | |
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this is a great poem! im so happy that u moved on and all poems don't have to rhyme to be good...they are about expressing ones thoughts, feelings, and how people see the world and this is great! keep it up! |
| On June 1st 2008 gotmilk1994 Said : | |
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Great Peom!!! You should so totally listen to kissofasia cuz it's true =] |
| On June 1st 2008 13sweetcheeks Said : | |
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thats good....great job...love it |
| On June 1st 2008 PorshaS Said : | |
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good |
| On June 1st 2008 AnaAlicia07 Said : | |
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NICE POEM.....I LIKED IT ..... KEEP UP THE GOOD WORK .....♥.... |
| On June 1st 2008 kissofasia Said : | |
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Sweetie,u don't have to be the best to please others.I like your poems the way they are and i'm glad you moved on....xoxo |
| On May 31st 2008 muse4apoem Said : | |
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It's WONDERFUL! :) |
| On May 31st 2008 XxCloudyEyesxX Said : | |
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love the hope behind the words, great job!! |
| On May 31st 2008 icsgrad07 Said : | |
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heheh yep me to girly. hey we have alot in common,
kmp ur peoms are awesome. it makes me happy to see there are others there like me. |
| On May 31st 2008 tiffany1058 Said : | |
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no its fine the way it is i like it |
