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Created on 5-28-08
Forever
By: xHickChick789x
Everytime I think of you
It goes on forever
I can't control my actions
Especially, when it's about you
The other night I couldn't wait to see,
Hoping I could run up to you,
And jump in your arms,
As you hold me tight
All this time I knew I was dreaming,
And you're not with me tonight
Why can't I be with you?
It ain't not crime
My dreams go on forever,
And I can't help it
You're always on my mind
Forever and for always
Created on: 5/28/08
Please Login to post comments| On June 13th 2008 drummajorpod Said : | |
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I know how that feels.. I'm glad you wrote it. It makes the pain of remembrance not as great. It makes the memories better. Great work! |
| On June 12th 2008 PeterSteeleYum Said : | |
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This was sweet. :] |
| On June 4th 2008 poemprincess Said : | |
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:) |
| On June 4th 2008 gonzo4201 Said : | |
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Wonderful poem |
| On June 3rd 2008 Gigglez200969 Said : | |
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good i liked it! |
| On June 2nd 2008 Joaquin09 Said : | |
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loved it |
| On June 1st 2008 orangefizzpop Said : | |
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This is like a fairytale poem :) Don't we all love fairytales?? (I'm a hopeless romantic, so.....) |
| On May 31st 2008 icsgrad07 Said : | |
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love love love it, its so like awwwwwwwwwww. very nice work |
| On May 30th 2008 21Shaina26 Said : | |
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zove it |
| On May 29th 2008 gotmilk1994 Said : | |
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awwwww this reminds me of a quote...wait i'll remember...oh ya "they ask how many times i think of you, i say once, because you never left my mind" I only paraphrased it but it'd something like that =] Great Job =] |
| On May 29th 2008 specialk107 Said : | |
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you just discribed the way i felt not to long ago today, good poem, |
| On May 29th 2008 UnSane420 Said : | |
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i love it...the feelings you put into this really show good job |
| On May 29th 2008 sixtiesdoll Said : | |
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Love this one. Keep writing, they keep getting better :) |
| On May 29th 2008 kissofasia Said : | |
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awwwwwwwwwwwwww,this is so sweeeeeet.love it |
| On May 29th 2008 chickenbroth Said : | |
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Great. |
| On May 28th 2008 pjjustin Said : | |
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this is great very awesome i'm glad you suggested it, i've finally posted new poems so if you get a chance check em out |
| On May 28th 2008 tiffany1058 Said : | |
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I love it |
| On May 28th 2008 XxCloudyEyesxX Said : | |
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i love it, it's incredibly bitter sweet |
| On May 28th 2008 vampirefreak61 Said : | |
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i like it, ist sweet |
| On May 28th 2008 hott555555555 Said : | |
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awwwwwwwwwwwwwwww sweet! |
| On May 28th 2008 thuhchris Said : | |
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love it... its cute |
| On May 28th 2008 N5607 Said : | |
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I love it. :) |
| On May 28th 2008 AnaAlicia07 Said : | |
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nice i like it ...good job.....♥..... |
| On May 28th 2008 crazycookie101 Said : | |
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awww...i like it. |
| On May 28th 2008 moosegurl01 Said : | |
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awww..this ones my fav of ur poems |
