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Plan Your Revenge
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Created on 5-22-08
Plan Your Revenge
By: xHickChick789x
Another day, Another hour
That's how long you've been gone
I don't think I can live another second more,
Without you right here beside me
Save me from this mess
Help me get away from it all
I can't stand it anymore
Seeing you with her,
Made me want to plan your revenge
You make me sick
See you with someone else
I can't stand seeing you dance with that slut
It's all way too much
Save me from this mess
Help me get away from it all
Watching you with her,
Made me want to punch her in the face
It made me want to plan your revenge
I stand my ground
And I'm not going to lose my friend
And I am not going to deal with it,
Unless, I'd plan your revenge
Save me from this mess
Help me get away from it all
I don't think I"ll ever move on,
But seeing you kiss her,
Made me want to plan your revenge
Right now, I'm gonna plan your revenge
Created on: 5/22/08
(Authors Note: This one is not about me. It's about a friend. It might not be as good as the others, because this isn't my true feelings, but I tried. Tell me what you guys think, ok?)
Please Login to post comments| On September 10th 2008 ohmyjonas54 Said : | |
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It is a great poem |
| On May 29th 2008 UnSane420 Said : | |
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amazing si ply beautifully i can relate to it |
| On May 28th 2008 gotmilk1994 Said : | |
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This is wonderfull... I can totally relate!!! |
| On May 27th 2008 sixtiesdoll Said : | |
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I like it ~ |
| On May 27th 2008 gonzo4201 Said : | |
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very good, jealousy is a motherfucker ain't it, I think you captured it well, good job! |
| On May 25th 2008 icsgrad07 Said : | |
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the best i've read.so deep, i feel exactly like this . ggrrrrrrrrrrr. i hate my ex so much, and it hurts me when i know hes flirting with other girls ciz i still have feelings for him. very very good job! |
| On May 25th 2008 Thugnastay227 Said : | |
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i didnt see anything wrong with this...i liked it. as usual with ur work. bravo. |
| On May 24th 2008 poemprincess Said : | |
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Very nice!! |
| On May 23rd 2008 misssweetiepie Said : | |
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♥LOVE IT...IT TOTALLY GOES WITH HOW I FELT THIS SUMMER...LOVE IT♥ |
| On May 23rd 2008 xashleyrosex Said : | |
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great as always! |
| On May 22nd 2008 xXPunkGirl09Xx Said : | |
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I love it. Nice job ♥ |
| On May 22nd 2008 thuhchris Said : | |
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love it... good job |
| On May 22nd 2008 drummajorpod Said : | |
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I like it.. I really like how the stanzas aren't all the same size. Very cool effect. =] |
| On May 22nd 2008 ybforz Said : | |
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I don't think that it rhymes queit the way you intended it to, but it's not bad! |
| On May 22nd 2008 AnaAlicia07 Said : | |
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NICE POEM THATS HE SAME WAY I FELT WHEN MY EX DUMPED ME FOR HIS EX ..BUT THAT SOON FADED AWAY WHEN I FOUND THE LOVE OF MY LIFE NOW I DON'T THINK ABOUT WHAT HE DID TO ME ANYMORE ....♥.... |
| On May 22nd 2008 N5607 Said : | |
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Great poem. |
| On May 22nd 2008 ladytsundea Said : | |
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it was pretty good. check mine out please. i would like to kno how mine are.thanks! |
| On May 22nd 2008 vampirefreak61 Said : | |
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great job, keep writing ^_^ |
| On May 22nd 2008 muse4apoem Said : | |
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It's really good nice work! =) |
| On May 22nd 2008 kissofasia Said : | |
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hehehe,nice job.I can't stand to be like that either. |
