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On My Mind (Always)
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Created on 4-30-08
On My Mind (Always)
By: xHickChick789x
Tell me something
Is he really out there, looking for me?
Cuz if he is, I'd be happy
He doesn't know how much I missed him
We have a lot of things to catch up on
When I'd cry, it was always about him
My heart, would be screamin' his name,
Hoping he'd come back for me
He's got me in a jumble
But I can't help but dream...
He's always on my mind
Tell me something
Is he really out there, thinking of me?
Cuz I know for sure that I am
I've been worried about him
And we need to look back at our past
Screaming out your name
I just can't get it away
Your always find a way to pop-up into my life
My stomach's got butterflies
But I can't gelp but dream...
He's always on my mind
Tell me this is true
Cuz he's got me all fumbled
My mind can't take it anymore
It feels like it's gonna blow,
But he'll always be on my mind
Sending my heart out to him
Taking in memories I'd always cherish
He's got me hooked to him
Something I just can't realese
But I can't help but dream...
He's always on my mind
Created on: 4/30/08
Please Login to post comments| On May 14th 2008 chickenbroth Said : | |
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Great work. |
| On May 13th 2008 laurita2010 Said : | |
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love it |
| On May 7th 2008 Gigglez200969 Said : | |
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Love it!Great Job!KMP! |
| On May 6th 2008 UnSane420 Said : | |
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i love it its amazing good job! |
| On May 5th 2008 mydragonlord Said : | |
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Really loved it, a typo or two, but it did not take away anything from the piece! well written!! |
| On May 2nd 2008 RAdNuDdOeM Said : | |
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Overall it's a good poem. i thought, however, that the words didn't flow into each other, and made it a little hard to follow. Again, i like it, i'm just saying some of the pieces of the puzzle seemed to be forced into place. Try reading it aloud and ask if there's a "more fluent word that i could put there." Of course, You are Your poems master and ultimately You decide how it lives and moves. i hope i've made this constructive. |
| On May 1st 2008 kjoy428 Said : | |
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wow i love it!! awesome job!! |
| On May 1st 2008 vampirefreak61 Said : | |
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I LOVE IT ^_^ |
| On May 1st 2008 kocher35 Said : | |
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love ittt girly!! |
| On May 1st 2008 muse4apoem Said : | |
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Anthor gosh darn mean person! Yet again to be mean to other peoples poems! Anyhow This is a very nic poem! Alot of thought went into this! =) |
| On May 1st 2008 MyBleedingToe Said : | |
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THIS IS CRAP!!! |
| On April 30th 2008 ReneakaKC Said : | |
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OMG I'm seriously BREATHELESS!!! It makes me think... I LOVE IT!!! =D |
| On April 30th 2008 AnimaniacAsh Said : | |
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cool one! |
| On April 30th 2008 xXPunkGirl09Xx Said : | |
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Aw I love this poem and why not find his email or name in myspace or facebook? You can always find him in home or anywhere. No matter what don't give up for true love. I love this poem. Waiting is a waste time but find your action and find him not waiting. |
| On April 30th 2008 dropdeadsucka Said : | |
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Good Job. =] |
