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Do You Remember Me?
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Created on 4-16-08
Do You Remember Me?
By: xHickChick789x
Do you remember me?
Or am I just another pretty face?
It's been so long since I've seen you
And I'd be surprised if I looked familar to you, at all
The reasons why I'm alone,
Is because you're the only on in my heart
I've never loved anyone as musch as you,
Not like you couldn't tell
Every night, you're in my dreams
And I didn't know why
But I'm pretty sure it has to do with love
Man, I just can not get you off my mind
It's like you put me on some spell
And I can't get out of it
Something about you,
Just drives me crazy.
Do you remember me?
Or am I just another pretty face?
It's been so long since I've see you
And I'd be surprised if I looked familar to you, at all
Ever since I last saw you,
I'd fake a smile,
Knowing you aren't right beside me
Inside, I'm dying
For all the years, I never saw you again,
I know one thing for sure
Some where inside you, you still love me,
As much as I love you
I'm probably better off,
Left as a memory
Because everytime I think of you
I wonder... Do you remember me?
Created on: 4/16/08
(Authors Note: I wrote this last night. I was spilling my guts out on paper. Please tell me what you think of it. This is what I'm going through right now. Enjoy!)
Please Login to post comments| On April 24th 2008 thickgirlz6990 Said : | |
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wow the title caught my eye an i absolutly LOVE it!!! i am through this... we was together for 2 yrs. we break up an he starts goin out wit this chick i knew for seven yrs. its been 3 months an im still goin crazy inside pisses me off lol but im tryin i kno he don deserve me so in the end he will be the one losin a good thing...ya digg??? lol! GOOD WORK!!! |
| On April 23rd 2008 sixtiesdoll Said : | |
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One of your best. Or maybe it is your best. 2 me :) I love it. |
| On April 23rd 2008 UnSane420 Said : | |
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awesome! |
| On April 22nd 2008 mydragonlord Said : | |
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What can i say! |
| On April 20th 2008 AnimaniacAsh Said : | |
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I LOVE IT, it really speaks to me thank you so much for sharing!
-Ash |
| On April 18th 2008 kjoy428 Said : | |
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amazing! i've been there before! its a hard place to be, but it will get better! |
| On April 17th 2008 mnjtsak Said : | |
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this is a wonderfully written poem, sad but wonderful. I've had this feeling before, but I know there's alot of ppl who have. Great job |
| On April 17th 2008 TheBranster Said : | |
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really wodnferful poem. what really isnt all too dandy is when someone you have really have liked for a couple of years becomes friends with a whore, and then becomes a whore herself. lmao, it kinda sucks. great poem, loved teh ending |
| On April 17th 2008 vampirefreak61 Said : | |
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gd job,i love it. dont ever stop writing.. |
| On April 17th 2008 pjjustin Said : | |
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this is really something awesome great job! |
| On April 17th 2008 muse4apoem Said : | |
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It has a really nice flow to it. Good work we all have been there. :) |
| On April 17th 2008 gusty13 Said : | |
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good poem |
| On April 17th 2008 xXEmoxGirlx3Xx Said : | |
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Wow...I love it! :D |
| On April 17th 2008 Mannaaaa Said : | |
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WOW! THATS SCARY! IT HASNT BEEN YEARS FOR ME... BUT ITS BEEN SIX MONTHS, AND HES ALL THE WAY IN MX! IM SO SORRY! UR NOT ALONE... LOOK AT ALL THESE COMMENTS! ALOT OF PPL GO THROUGH THE SAME TERRIBLE TIME... AND IT STILL CONTINUES... I FEEL FOR YOU. |
| On April 17th 2008 Thugnastay227 Said : | |
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this was something i know rather well (the feeling i know well good job and i'm sorry that those thoughts haunt u. |
