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He's Got it All

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Created on 4-9-08

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He's Got it All

By: xHickChick789x

Every breathe he takes

Every move he makes

Let's me know he has everything,

I want and need

The way he kisses me

The way he smiles at me,

Makes me wanna melt

He's got it all

Everything about him

Just makes me love him more

I don't know what it is

But he's got it all

Created on: 4/9/08

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On April 13th 2008 pjjustin Said :

	i thought it was very creative and emotive it was great good job!

On April 13th 2008 xXEmoxGirlx3Xx Said :

	i love it

On April 10th 2008 mydragonlord Said :

	loved it!! short and sweet!

On April 9th 2008 Joaquin09 Said :

	its beautiful are like in love or something

On April 9th 2008 sixtiesdoll Said :

	oh. and I don't think you did it intentionally :) I do that sometimes too. Also it does sound good

On April 9th 2008 sixtiesdoll Said :

	I agree with lizzy. It does start out like that~ obv. it leans totally opposite after that. I like it :) I think you explained it all well :)

On April 9th 2008 xXPunkGirl09Xx Said :

	Love it

On April 9th 2008 xHickChick789x Said :

	In response to muse4apoem: I was just ryhming. I really didn't take notice of that. lol Along with all of the other poems I write. I just want it to sound good

On April 9th 2008 Teliana Said :

	Are you sure he's got it all? j/k it's good but no guy is perfect. I really like this one 2

On April 9th 2008 muse4apoem Said :

	It start out as a "Police song." (in the first two lines.) Its really wonderful though!

On April 9th 2008 nickynicole901 Said :

	nice...i like it and i kno how u feel