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The Day I Left You

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The Day I Left You

 By: xHickChick789x  

 

 

 

One blustery day,

 

Cold winter morning,

 

Miserable without a doubt

 

I knew I had to go,

 

But there was nothing I could do.

 

 

 

I know you want me,

 

But the time must come

 

This day is not right for me

 

We must move on,

 

Never see each other again.

 

 

 

Time flies by when you're having fun

 

And the time has come

 

I can't live without you,

 

But I'm being forced

 

Can't you tell.

 

 

 

I have no choice but to go

 

I'll miss you,

 

And everything goes blank

 

That was the day I left you

 

And I can never go back

 

 

 

Created on: 4/6/08

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On April 13th 2008 sixtiesdoll Said :
sixtiesdoll I like this. It's beautifully written. Nice job :)
On April 9th 2008 mydragonlord Said :
mydragonlord ooo nicely done. very sad but well written!
On April 8th 2008 dsouthernlily Said :
my picture
awesome
On April 8th 2008 muse4apoem Said :
muse4apoem The forth paragraph was my favorite! Good work!
On April 7th 2008 Joaquin09 Said :
Joaquin09 hey liked it alot
On April 7th 2008 specialk107 Said :
specialk107 another good poem, but sad.....
On April 7th 2008 morbidangel585 Said :
morbidangel585 aw sad but i loved it!
On April 7th 2008 xXPunkGirl09Xx Said :
xXPunkGirl09Xx Very beautiful job u have done. I really love when you desbribe emotion and details how u feel. Love it
On April 7th 2008 gonzo4201 Said :
gonzo4201 Wonderfully done!! Keep it up
On April 6th 2008 Teliana Said :
Teliana Love this poem I can really related keep writing your good