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The Day I Left You
The Day I Left You
By: xHickChick789x
One blustery day,
Cold winter morning,
Miserable without a doubt
I knew I had to go,
But there was nothing I could do.
I know you want me,
But the time must come
This day is not right for me
We must move on,
Never see each other again.
Time flies by when you're having fun
And the time has come
I can't live without you,
But I'm being forced
Can't you tell.
I have no choice but to go
I'll miss you,
And everything goes blank
That was the day I left you
And I can never go back
Created on: 4/6/08
| On April 13th 2008 sixtiesdoll Said : | |
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I like this. It's beautifully written. Nice job :) |
| On April 9th 2008 mydragonlord Said : | |
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ooo nicely done. very sad but well written! |
| On April 8th 2008 dsouthernlily Said : | |
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awesome |
| On April 8th 2008 muse4apoem Said : | |
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The forth paragraph was my favorite! Good work! |
| On April 7th 2008 Joaquin09 Said : | |
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hey liked it alot |
| On April 7th 2008 specialk107 Said : | |
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another good poem, but sad..... |
| On April 7th 2008 morbidangel585 Said : | |
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aw sad but i loved it! |
| On April 7th 2008 xXPunkGirl09Xx Said : | |
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Very beautiful job u have done. I really love when you desbribe emotion and details how u feel. Love it |
| On April 7th 2008 gonzo4201 Said : | |
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Wonderfully done!! Keep it up |
| On April 6th 2008 Teliana Said : | |
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Love this poem I can really related keep writing your good |
