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Created on 4-3-08
Here with Me
By: xHickChick789x
I'm trying to convince myself
That you're not the one for me
But the more I think about it,
I believe it
And the more I want you here with me
You never leave my mind
Even when I have a million things to worry about
Will you catch me when I'm falling?
Will you take my breath away?
Will you be here for me everyday?
When I wake up in the morning;
The only thing I see is loneliness
Making me wish you were here with me,
Just one more time
Just this once
Created on: 4/3/08
Please Login to post comments| On April 24th 2008 sixtiesdoll Said : | |
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I like it. Nice job :) |
| On April 9th 2008 mydragonlord Said : | |
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really like this one could almost be a song, all it needs is a tweek here and there and whala a brilliant song. |
| On April 8th 2008 dsouthernlily Said : | |
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love the flow |
| On April 7th 2008 jeff2625 Said : | |
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I liked it..great poem... |
| On April 5th 2008 poemprincess Said : | |
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I kmow how you feel to want him with you sometimes I wan to call and tell him to come over right now so I can see him =) good job
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| On April 4th 2008 stef4732 Said : | |
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love it |
| On April 4th 2008 UnSane420 Said : | |
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amazing thumbs up |
| On April 4th 2008 jetkills Said : | |
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nice :] |
| On April 4th 2008 muse4apoem Said : | |
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Nice poem! :) |
| On April 4th 2008 Thugnastay227 Said : | |
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i love how ur poems have a melodic flow to it |
| On April 4th 2008 xashleyrosex Said : | |
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awesome! |
| On April 4th 2008 EvilRaven9892 Said : | |
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me loves it |
| On April 4th 2008 angeleyes62580 Said : | |
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very good poem !! |
| On April 3rd 2008 specialk107 Said : | |
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another grate poem, |
| On April 3rd 2008 specialk107 Said : | |
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another grate poem, |
| On April 3rd 2008 specialk107 Said : | |
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another grate poem, |
| On April 3rd 2008 specialk107 Said : | |
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another grate poem, |
| On April 3rd 2008 gonzo4201 Said : | |
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very good, keep it up! |
| On April 3rd 2008 moosegurl01 Said : | |
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really good |
