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Bring on the Rain

Views (192) Pain Created on 3-19-08 Flag

Bring on the Rain

By: xHickChick789x  

Shedding tears

As they roll down my cheek

I closed my eyes

And hope for something

To bring on the rain

 

I just couldn't imagine

What else could go wrong?

Sometime I outta wonder

When the time passes by

And nothing else is there

 

I take a deep breath

Look out my window

And I see it all

The rain that fall from the sky

Are no longer raindrops

 

Rain to tears

I watch them

Slide down my cheek

And on the ground

My sad memory drifts away

So bring on the rain

 

Created on: 3/19/08

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On April 22nd 2008 audica Said :
audica hey, guess what? i'm listening to this song right now (bring on the rain by jo de messina and tim mcgraw) yeah, but i loved this poem
On March 30th 2008 dhmm Said :
dhmm great poem my fav. what the last part no lie
On March 24th 2008 mydragonlord Said :
mydragonlord Brilliantly done!!
On March 21st 2008 BSMuffin23 Said :
BSMuffin23 This is great!!!!
On March 20th 2008 piratesrule78 Said :
piratesrule78 very deep and beautiful nice job
On March 20th 2008 thethreatIF Said :
thethreatIF interesting style... i liked it a lot....
On March 20th 2008 poemprincess Said :
poemprincess good job.
On March 20th 2008 KateyBaby Said :
KateyBaby I thought it was great
On March 20th 2008 xashleyrosex Said :
xashleyrosex i like it!
On March 20th 2008 FireAngel420 Said :
FireAngel420 good job that was really good
On March 20th 2008 seekerovtruth Said :
seekerovtruth May the rain wash away all your tears. Good job!
On March 20th 2008 vampirefreak61 Said :
vampirefreak61 love it ^_^ great 1!
On March 20th 2008 angeleyes62580 Said :
angeleyes62580 pretty and sweet!! I enjoyed this poem very much
On March 20th 2008 icsgrad07 Said :
icsgrad07 wow i wrote something somewhat like this once, its still saved on my old computer, i'll post it soon. great work, its funny how rain symbolizes so much sadnessa and pain in someones life, because it really does for me. again great work kmp on other poems
On March 20th 2008 Thugnastay227 Said :
Thugnastay227 u are talented young lady.