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Do You Wish I Was There With You?

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Do You Wish I Was There With You

By: xHickChick789x

You sit next to her

Gazing at the stars

When the sun slowly chases,

The moon from the sky

 

What are you thinking?

Is it all that you wanted?

Do like what ya see?

Or do you wish I was there with you?

 

You abandoned you dreams

Was it all worth it?

Each kiss gets closer

To the first and the last

Do those memories haunt you?

Do you get what you need?

Or do you wish I was there with you?

 

Are you sure?

Cause you don't seem happy

Do you wish it was me,

Sitting right there next to you?

So do you wish I was there with you?

I know I do...

 

Created on: 3/17/08
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On August 28th 2008 moonight Said :
moonight aww ithat was goooood
On August 4th 2008 Alli684 Said :
Alli684 This is really good! :)
On July 9th 2008 oxteshixo Said :
oxteshixo wow that beautiful ...
On April 22nd 2008 audica Said :
audica this is my fave of urs!! i love it!!!!
On March 18th 2008 mydragonlord Said :
mydragonlord Oooo that was beautifull!!!
On March 18th 2008 gonzo4201 Said :
gonzo4201 Absolutely wonderful
On March 17th 2008 xXPunkGirl09Xx Said :
xXPunkGirl09Xx Beautiful written I love it
On March 17th 2008 sixtiesdoll Said :
sixtiesdoll This is one of my favs~ I like it lots~ Lovely job! :)
On March 17th 2008 seekerovtruth Said :
seekerovtruth You little temptress you. haha This was poetic truth in motion. Very good job!
On March 17th 2008 PeterSteeleYum Said :
PeterSteeleYum Seems passionate. Very nice.
On March 17th 2008 muse4apoem Said :
muse4apoem This is my favorite from you! It's so good! LOVE IT! :)
On March 17th 2008 chinadoll1215 Said :
chinadoll1215
This is really beautiful!
I absolutely love this ending!
great job! :]
On March 17th 2008 Jermie6363 Said :
Jermie6363 Beautiful