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Lettin' life roll by me

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Day by Day

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Day by Day

 By: xHickChick789x

 

Chasin' cars

Lettin' life roll by me

I can feel it going by

Like an airplane

Rushin' past in the wind

 

Days go by

Day by day

You better start livin' right now

Cars fly by

More than you can see

 

Let our life soar up ahead

Don't you know that the days go by

Day by day

We're here today

Life goes day by day

 

Created on: 3/17/08
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On July 2nd 2008 EdwardRoxMySox Said :
EdwardRoxMySox this one is really good, it says alot. gj. read some of my poems?
On June 23rd 2008 estidszeremet Said :
estidszeremet Very good, I like it.
On March 19th 2008 dsouthernlily Said :
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awesome...very good
On March 18th 2008 mydragonlord Said :
mydragonlord I can hear it in tune with a upbeat to it.
On March 17th 2008 sixtiesdoll Said :
sixtiesdoll It does sound rather lyrical~ I really liked it though. Nice job!
On March 17th 2008 seekerovtruth Said :
seekerovtruth It remeinds me a bit of Keith Urbans song Days go By with a twist. It was a fun read.
On March 17th 2008 PeterSteeleYum Said :
PeterSteeleYum Similar to "Fast Cars and Freedom" Heh I love this!
On March 17th 2008 muse4apoem Said :
muse4apoem It's sound kinda like two different songs! Lol I like it!
On March 17th 2008 chinadoll1215 Said :
chinadoll1215 I loved the part "Let our life soar up ahead Don't you know that the days go by" Its really pretty :] Greattt job!
On March 17th 2008 Jermie6363 Said :
Jermie6363 Big fan of your poetry