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Breaking Waves
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Created on 3-16-08
Breaking Waves
By: xHickChick789xIn the distance is breaking waves
That crash on shores
Nothing better to do then to feel the mist
Hit my face, as the breaking waves hit the shore
Breaking waves pass by every minute of our lives
Just relax and imagine your there
On the beach, watching breaking waves
Let the wind blow through your hair
And stand in the bright sun
Now that this poem is all done
What will these breaking waves to next...
Created on: 3/16/08
Please Login to post comments| On March 17th 2008 chinadoll1215 Said : | |
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oooh.
Very..calming, and relaxing :]
love it! |
| On March 17th 2008 stef4732 Said : | |
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I was accually relaxing when i read this lol |
| On March 17th 2008 muse4apoem Said : | |
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I LOVE that last line! Such a good poem! |
| On March 16th 2008 sixtiesdoll Said : | |
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It's not that short. I love the waves!! They're so very relaxing~ Nice poem :) |
| On March 16th 2008 PeterSteeleYum Said : | |
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I love that feeling! When you have nothing better to do than sit and relax on the beach then you have it made! Nice one. [: |
| On March 16th 2008 xHickChick789x Said : | |
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Sorry it was so short. I really didn't know what to put next |
