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The Right Man

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The Right Man

By: xHickChick789x

He's gotta hold me tight

Someone to sleep at night

The one to cuddle with

Someone who won't tell me a myth

 

He's gotta care for me

No one more than three

Cheatin' won't last long, hun

One wrong move and your done

 

He's gotta love me

And not use me

He's gotta be my biggest fan

But is he the right man?

 

 

Created on: 3/16/08
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On March 19th 2008 FireAngel420 Said :
FireAngel420 nice job I love it
On March 18th 2008 BSMuffin23 Said :
BSMuffin23 This is great i wish mine was like this!!
On March 17th 2008 chinadoll1215 Said :
chinadoll1215 My favorite! :] great job!
On March 17th 2008 stef4732 Said :
stef4732 Great job loving it
On March 16th 2008 pjjustin Said :
pjjustin it's really great i caught my attention lol great job!
On March 16th 2008 sadowski89 Said :
sadowski89 pretty good!
On March 16th 2008 ralicia Said :
ralicia do you write songs?
On March 16th 2008 fallenXx420 Said :
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i like it a lot! ur totally right about the cheating i hate them too..very well done!
On March 16th 2008 gonzo4201 Said :
gonzo4201 Very good, very true
On March 16th 2008 jezabell236 Said :
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Amen to this one my friend!!! Very nicely done:) Love your taste in music to by the way!
On March 16th 2008 PeterSteeleYum Said :
PeterSteeleYum I like! [:
On March 16th 2008 xXPunkGirl09Xx Said :
xXPunkGirl09Xx aww that was good! i totally love it!
On March 16th 2008 sixtiesdoll Said :
sixtiesdoll Oh~ I like this one. Couldn't agree more!! Nice job! :)
On March 16th 2008 kesaia1029 Said :
kesaia1029 wonderful!A guy should be like this =)
On March 16th 2008 Jermie6363 Said :
Jermie6363 yes! i love it