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Start reminisin' til nightfall

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I Just Don't Want It to End

Views (206) Love Created on 3-14-08 Flag

 

I Just Don't Want It to End 

By: xHickChick789x

Follow the path of rain

That pours down on my soul

Tell me to stop worrying

I wait for you til tomorrow

 

Settlin' in a good place

Start reminisin' til nightfall

Watching stars surround me

And sit down on the beach

 

Sinking my toes in the sand

Letting the breeze hit my face

And the water splashing up at my nose

I laugh and have a good time

 

I realize my good time has just began

As I notice you walk up to me

And I smile, you hold me tight

I just don't want it to end

 

Created on: 3/14/08
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On March 19th 2008 FireAngel420 Said :
FireAngel420 very good
On March 19th 2008 MCRsLover Said :
MCRsLover so nice, i love it!
On March 16th 2008 RealFiction616 Said :
RealFiction616 This one didn't really catch me from the beginning, it took a few stanzas for me to get into it.
On March 15th 2008 sadowski89 Said :
sadowski89 omg this is soo good!!! kmp for anything u write!!
On March 15th 2008 xashleyrosex Said :
xashleyrosex i like it
On March 15th 2008 Thugnastay227 Said :
Thugnastay227 i concur with the others. i like it. very happy
On March 15th 2008 muse4apoem Said :
muse4apoem Blissful! Very preety! :)
On March 14th 2008 xXPunkGirl09Xx Said :
xXPunkGirl09Xx I like it! ♥
On March 14th 2008 pjjustin Said :
pjjustin this is great! i loved how expressed your feelings in this poem, and i loved how you said you knew the good times had just began that was awesome good job!
On March 14th 2008 seekerovtruth Said :
seekerovtruth I do like this. I think it could the beginings to a song.
On March 14th 2008 chinadoll1215 Said :
chinadoll1215 I like this poem a lot! Its very nice.. and sweet :]
On March 14th 2008 chinadoll1215 Said :
chinadoll1215 I like this poem a lot! Its very nice.. and sweet :]
On March 14th 2008 PeterSteeleYum Said :
PeterSteeleYum So sweet. I like!
On March 14th 2008 gonzo4201 Said :
gonzo4201 very nice, I really like this
On March 14th 2008 sixtiesdoll Said :
sixtiesdoll This is pretty~ I like it!