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I Just Don't Want It to End
I Just Don't Want It to End
By: xHickChick789xFollow the path of rain
That pours down on my soul
Tell me to stop worrying
I wait for you til tomorrow
Settlin' in a good place
Start reminisin' til nightfall
Watching stars surround me
And sit down on the beach
Sinking my toes in the sand
Letting the breeze hit my face
And the water splashing up at my nose
I laugh and have a good time
I realize my good time has just began
As I notice you walk up to me
And I smile, you hold me tight
I just don't want it to end
Created on: 3/14/08
| On March 19th 2008 FireAngel420 Said : | |
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very good |
| On March 19th 2008 MCRsLover Said : | |
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so nice, i love it! |
| On March 16th 2008 RealFiction616 Said : | |
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This one didn't really catch me from the beginning, it took a few stanzas for me to get into it. |
| On March 15th 2008 sadowski89 Said : | |
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omg this is soo good!!! kmp for anything u write!! |
| On March 15th 2008 xashleyrosex Said : | |
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i like it |
| On March 15th 2008 Thugnastay227 Said : | |
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i concur with the others. i like it. very happy |
| On March 15th 2008 muse4apoem Said : | |
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Blissful! Very preety! :) |
| On March 14th 2008 xXPunkGirl09Xx Said : | |
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I like it! ♥ |
| On March 14th 2008 pjjustin Said : | |
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this is great! i loved how expressed your feelings in this poem, and i loved how you said you knew the good times had just began that was awesome good job! |
| On March 14th 2008 seekerovtruth Said : | |
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I do like this. I think it could the beginings to a song. |
| On March 14th 2008 chinadoll1215 Said : | |
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I like this poem a lot!
Its very nice.. and sweet :] |
| On March 14th 2008 chinadoll1215 Said : | |
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I like this poem a lot!
Its very nice.. and sweet :] |
| On March 14th 2008 PeterSteeleYum Said : | |
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So sweet. I like! |
| On March 14th 2008 gonzo4201 Said : | |
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very nice, I really like this |
| On March 14th 2008 sixtiesdoll Said : | |
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This is pretty~ I like it! |


