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Might run out, without a doubt

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Life

Views (180) Worry Created on 3-14-08 Flag

Life

By: xHickChick789x

 

The sky is breaking,

My heart is aching.

Kicking up dust,

Singing is a must.

 

Through the tales of fame,

To the Hall of Shame.

Spending the last few nights,

Without a care.

 

Looking out my window,

Things I can only bare.

Today, is a new day.

And I it can turn out,

That you'd have to pay.

 

Life goes on.

Might run out,

Without a doubt

We can live this life.

 

Created on: 3/14/08

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On March 17th 2008 poemprincess Said :
poemprincess I don't know what to thing it's not bad though. keep writing
On March 16th 2008 kesaia1029 Said :
kesaia1029 I like it =).Its missing something tho but still I like.=D
On March 15th 2008 muse4apoem Said :
muse4apoem It's beautiful...So far Like everyone elese says Theres gaps! I know you have the talent to add more to it.
On March 14th 2008 chinadoll1215 Said :
chinadoll1215 I like it :] But, it seems a little...unfinished. But, it is still a great poem! please, dont be offended by that :[
On March 14th 2008 PeterSteeleYum Said :
PeterSteeleYum Hmm, nice one. [:
On March 14th 2008 oceanbluebook Said :
oceanbluebook this one cheered me up i like it:)
On March 14th 2008 gonzo4201 Said :
gonzo4201 No one can ever truly understand, or appreciate a poem, or any other form of writing, better than the writer, but on the same note, the writer is usually the worse critic, I know I am.
On March 14th 2008 sixtiesdoll Said :
sixtiesdoll I like the wording~ I agree with ~pjjustin
On March 14th 2008 stef4732 Said :
stef4732 Keep it up :)
On March 14th 2008 pjjustin Said :
pjjustin heres what i think, as long as it pleases you and you painted the right picture with the right words in your own mind and heart then thats all that should really matter i think its a good poem with creativity and good emotion
On March 14th 2008 UnSane420 Said :
UnSane420 i like it, it seems unfinshished though i think you can add something to it though but its still really good.
On March 14th 2008 tyiqoqibfiobao Said :
tyiqoqibfiobao im not quite sure what i think of this one its like ur drawing a picture and left out the people its just feels like ur missing something sorry im not more helpful keep writing though