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What's Left of Me
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Created on 3-14-08
What’s Left of Me
By: xHickChick789x
Takin' what's left of this mess
Givin' it away to those who need it
Deep dark sky above me
Watches my every move
As I clean up what's left of me
Pourin' down rain
Listenin' to the thunder cry
That's when I always ask why
Why did you leave us behind
As I try and find what's left of me
Sky dazing
Helps me ease the pain
Leavin' the pieces
Letting us go
I can't find what's left of me
Created on: 3/14/08
Note: This is my first poem I wrote on here. Please tell me what you think. Thanks
Please Login to post comments| On June 9th 2008 onelove6fs Said : | |
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nice |
| On May 5th 2008 Ihatemyself13 Said : | |
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wow. i really love it. keep doing it what you do. :) |
| On April 6th 2008 Joaquin09 Said : | |
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its great like the ending |
| On March 31st 2008 Thugnastay227 Said : | |
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dont know if i commented on this already but i like this one. |
| On March 27th 2008 moosegurl01 Said : | |
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really nice |
| On March 19th 2008 dsouthernlily Said : | |
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wowwzer |
| On March 17th 2008 nickynicole901 Said : | |
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wow nice i love it |
| On March 17th 2008 nickynicole901 Said : | |
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wow nice i love it |
| On March 16th 2008 incrediblesin Said : | |
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It's deep and I like it, Keep writing and let no one tell you different. Remember, you are your own cridict, and it is your opinion that matters the most. |
| On March 16th 2008 LeahRae2008 Said : | |
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I LOVE THIS POEM. its so deep and passionate. its like i can feel wat u were going through as i read. |
| On March 16th 2008 xXPunkGirl09Xx Said : | |
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very lovely! i totally love it! it is beautiful written. |
| On March 16th 2008 RealFiction616 Said : | |
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I like this poem. It's very revealing without revealing too much. Nice Work. |
| On March 15th 2008 poemprincess Said : | |
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very good!!! I can totally relate. |
| On March 15th 2008 ralicia Said : | |
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lovely, well written |
| On March 14th 2008 lovesthestars Said : | |
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love it! keep it up! |
