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Created on 5-20-07
my heart. broken. wounded. searching for warmth, that would never come. a crimson river flows from it. it flows to the end. the end of time. the end of my love. for you. yet the feelings aren't the same. unrequited as many would say. but my heart shall forever remain shattered, until your love fills in the missing pieces.
Please Login to post comments| On May 31st 2007 babyblue187954 Said : | |
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I like this.. Its like your hearts a door and with out a key you cant open it amd untill its open its empty |
| On May 25th 2007 Glork21 Said : | |
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this is a beautiful poem. |
| On May 20th 2007 sophiepinkfair Said : | |
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i really like the structure with all the short phrases and full stops. very nice |
| On May 20th 2007 NeutralR1 Said : | |
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good stuff. |
| On May 20th 2007 Trippaholic Said : | |
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awwww that is definitly beautiful!! |
| On May 20th 2007 drowningnlove Said : | |
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awww thats so beautiful, a lot of emotion. I love it hun! |
| On May 20th 2007 xCiNNAKiTTix Said : | |
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...i was bored, so i wrote this poem...uh, i have a sketch i did earlier to go with it, and it had some sort of symbolism in it, but i don't gottz a scanner to scan it...*silently curses*...rate pleesh... |
