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Do you deserve her?

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Do you deserve her? Do you really? Do you deserve the way she smiles, the way she frowns? The way she can pick you up when you're feeling down.

She, a rare shapire jewel. Diamonds and pearls are too common. She is beyond that. Her beauty like no other, and her mind as wit as she. When she talks it's as if Heaven sends angels to grace us, singing softly yet leaving an impact. Her smile as radiant as the moon, and like the moon she goes and comes so that all can enjoy. She can make something out of nothing, she can take the broken and fix it, like she does me. Or at least did.

You, you're nothing compared to her. A slave to her, to follow her every will. She beckons you and like a dog you return to her faithfully. She is yours and you're hers, but do you really deserve her? Do you think of her every day and every night? Does she give you reason to live? Do you wait by the phone for her to call you every night? Do you turn every time she talks? Do you melt at the sight of her? If not, then tell me this, do you deserve her?

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On May 31st 2007 babyblue187954 Said :
babyblue187954 I never really thought this but the guy sitting right beside me said he has when I was with someone else. But anyway great poem
On May 31st 2007 babyblue187954 Said :
babyblue187954 I never really thought this but the guy sitting right beside me said he has when I was with someone else. But anyway great poem
On May 15th 2007 NeutralR1 Said :
NeutralR1 you remind me of bobby busche, from the water boy...
On May 13th 2007 xCiNNAKiTTix Said :
xCiNNAKiTTix ...YUSH, iF YOU READ Mi OTHER POEM, ZiS WOULD SORT OF GO WiTH iT...i DiD LYKE SOMEONE, STiLL KiNDA DO, BUT NOT AS MUCH...VELL, ZiS WAS AiMED TOWARD THE PERSON WHO TOOK MY CRUSH...i WAS ANGERED WEN i FiRST FOUND OUT, BUT i'M GETTiN THROUGH iT...SLOWLi ND PAiNFULLi...