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Falling 4 some1 whos never gonna catch u

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Hanging By a Thread

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I'm falling slowly from that mountain
The one I worked so hard to climb
If you were to climb that mountain
It is me, that you won't find

 

I had lost my balance long ago
And now I'm holding on by a thread

I'm surprised that I'm still holding, you know?
Because seeing me now…I should be dead

 

I climbed that mountain just for you
And I stood tall for so long
I waited up there, waited for you
But soon I realized I was in the wrong


I realized you were never going to come

I had fallen for invisible bait
I didn't even notice what I had done
Until I was falling and it was too late

 

I lost my footing and fell for you

I was hanging over the side

There was nothing I could do
But I know I should have died

 

Only I didn't completely fall
Now I'm hanging by a thread
But the thread is so small
I'm sure I'll soon be dead


But for now I'm waiting here
I'm waiting for you to come
Because, if you don't, I fear
That there is nothing that can be done

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On January 6th 2008 Trena09 Said :
Trena09 i really like this poem and i can really relate to it... Great Job! =) would you please read my poem "Acceptance" and tell my what you think?
On January 6th 2008 chipmunkgirl10 Said :
chipmunkgirl10 this is REALLY good! Really Deep! would you please check out my newest poem "The Complications Of Love And Friendship" I would much appreciate it!