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As I Lay Dying
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Created on 1-5-08
Thoughts in my head
Wishing I were dead
Thoughts of suicide
Just to feel alive
Nothing making sense
But it all depends
On how I think
It feels like a dream
I'm telling you
There's nothing you can do
I'm going insane
Don't take the blame
Shoulda listened to the thoughts
But I thought that if I fought
Things would improve
But now there's nothing I can do
I'm finally dying
No use trying
To save me
So just let me be
I'm going now
I don't know how
But I no longer belong
My life is all wrong
So farewell to you all
Let me take the fall
As I lay dying
Just know I quit trying
Please Login to post comments| On January 6th 2008 crazygirl2313 Said : | |
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omg i love it.. i can relate to this |
| On January 6th 2008 crazygirl2313 Said : | |
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omg i love it.. i can relate to this |
| On January 5th 2008 transgenic Said : | |
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This is amazing and emotional! I can relate to this feeling. |
| On January 5th 2008 stics917 Said : | |
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nice poem....and the band is awesome and has poetic lyrics ;) good job here |
| On January 5th 2008 fallenXx420 Said : | |
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hey good poem.. the band is good too.. |
| On January 5th 2008 nickjonson Said : | |
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As I Lay Dying--I LOVE THAT BAND!! You should read their lyrics, they're really beautiful. I feel the same way right now; all this "joy" we ever feel fades away just as quickly as it came...what's the use if we will loose all happiness and be lost in despair forever? |
| On January 5th 2008 rhi2009 Said : | |
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Hugs I feel your pain! You can make it. I am not the only one as i read yours. I was in this spot at one time! stay strong you can make it i am still here!!! hugs you tight |
| On January 5th 2008 mash01 Said : | |
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The thing about falling is knowing that you CAN get back up. God Bless |
