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That Night
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Created on 10-13-07
You were supposed to look out for me. But you went off on your own. I should have looked out for you. But I didn’t know. Something happened to both of us. Which could have been prevented. But now it is too late. And our little lives are dented. You promised to be there for me. But I didn’t really need you. It was you who needed someone. But I didn’t know what to do. I knew what you were doing. I wanted to open the door. I felt my heart breaking. I didn’t want to be in pain anymore. But he wouldn’t let me go. I would have told you right there. How I felt about you. And now I can barely bare. I confessed to him how I felt. But he held me and wouldn’t let me go. I struggled against his arms. All I wanted was to let you know. My heart felt like it was falling apart. I was on the verge of tears. I had never felt like this before. I was realizing all of my fears. I knew what you were doing. But when I got to the door. My heart was done breaking. I couldn’t feel it anymore.
Please Login to post comments| On October 14th 2007 bartaalltheway Said : | |
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wow. i think that's all i can say. :] |
| On October 13th 2007 write4life Said : | |
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This is a true story...not the full story, but it was how I felt. |
| On October 13th 2007 Trena09 Said : | |
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I like this alot |
