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Watching You
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Created on 9-21-07
Watching you
Is all I can do
To tell you how I feel
Would make things too real
All the times you aren't there
It is something I can't bear
And when you are with me
I wish you could see
That when I see you
I don't know what to do
I lose my breath
And prepare for death
I wish you knew
What I feel for you
I want you to know
Before you have to go...
I love you
And it is all I can do
To not stare
When I see you there
Please Login to post comments| On September 30th 2007 lisaljb Said : | |
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very beautiful, sweet and simple, nice job. |
| On September 21st 2007 PoeticPang Said : | |
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awww,, sweetly saddening,, damn ,,, u should say it loud and clear,, would totally make things sooo much more than it seems right now,, it's hard at first,, but who knows? take a chance of change.... we only lose to gain something new (possibility of losing one person and gaining that one person back as something else,, perhaps more?)........... great flow,, very well written out,, great job!~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~Pang |
| On September 21st 2007 Trishy48 Said : | |
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AWWWW!!!! I LOVE THIS!!!! |
