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Understatement of my Love
If I could love any girl
as much as I love you,
then Armaggedon is upon us
and Hell is smashing through.
If I were here to list EACH
reason that I love you so,
Then I would have to start in spring time
so I don't die in snow.
The only thing the others
see is all of your good looks,
but when I look, there's a sensation
that can't be taught in books.
Your beauty has me frozen
and your kindness reels me in.
A helpless fish you make me into
when you flash me a grin.
We laugh and joke together;
the only thing I conceal
is that I am ripped to shreds to know
You don't know how I feel.
You were there to comfort me
you can always make me smile.
To see you I would climb a mountain
with height a million miles.
I'd do anything within
God's laws just to see you laugh.
I would suffer fire and torture
all this on your behalf.
The 1 way you can hurt me
when I finally get elan
to confess to you the way I feel,
with cruelty, you ban.
| On August 8th 2008 Dragonwing999 Said : | |
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nice |
| On July 3rd 2008 xXPunkGirl09Xx Said : | |
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This is really beautiful poem, and i totally love this♥ |
| On June 27th 2008 Dannibabe94 Said : | |
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This a sweet poem. I really liked it. |
| On June 10th 2008 apstolicwwjd Said : | |
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Thats so sweet... |
| On June 2nd 2008 kissofasia Said : | |
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You are such a great poet.I love this..... |
| On June 2nd 2008 orangefizzpop Said : | |
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pretty good! |
| On May 22nd 2008 unreal1298 Said : | |
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wow. I can't believe I didn't notice this poem until 2 monthes later! It's really good! and thx for the vocab, it helped! |
| On March 26th 2008 williamscott7 Said : | |
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Vocab: elan: Ardor inspired by passion or enthusiasm. |


