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Understatement of my Love

Views (83) Love Created on 3-26-08 Flag

If I could love any girl
as much as I love you,
then Armaggedon is upon us
and Hell is smashing through.

If I were here to list EACH
reason that I love you so,
Then I would have to start in spring time
so I don't die in snow.

The only thing the others
see is all of your good looks,
but when I look, there's a sensation
that can't be taught in books.

Your beauty has me frozen
and your kindness reels me in.
A helpless fish you make me into
when you flash me a grin.

We laugh and joke together;
the only thing I conceal
is that I am ripped to shreds to know
You don't know how I feel.

You were there to comfort me
you can always make me smile.
To see you I would climb a mountain
with height a million miles.

I'd do anything within
God's laws just to see you laugh.
I would suffer fire and torture
all this on your behalf.

The 1 way you can hurt me
when I finally get elan
to confess to you the way I feel,
with cruelty, you ban. 

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On August 8th 2008 Dragonwing999 Said :
Dragonwing999 nice
On July 3rd 2008 xXPunkGirl09Xx Said :
xXPunkGirl09Xx This is really beautiful poem, and i totally love this♥
On June 27th 2008 Dannibabe94 Said :
Dannibabe94 This a sweet poem. I really liked it.
On June 10th 2008 apstolicwwjd Said :
apstolicwwjd Thats so sweet...
On June 2nd 2008 kissofasia Said :
kissofasia You are such a great poet.I love this.....
On June 2nd 2008 orangefizzpop Said :
orangefizzpop pretty good!
On May 22nd 2008 unreal1298 Said :
unreal1298 wow. I can't believe I didn't notice this poem until 2 monthes later! It's really good! and thx for the vocab, it helped!
On March 26th 2008 williamscott7 Said :
williamscott7 Vocab: elan: Ardor inspired by passion or enthusiasm.