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My Best Friend |
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Fighting the Snake |
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My Life Goes On |
Fighting the Snake
I was young.
I was innocent.
I was incorruptable.
Then influences arose.
More profane words.
Dirty jokes.
At first, I ignored them.
I found no interest in these influences.
But soon I gave in.
Gave in to the need to be recognized.
To have friends.
At first, it was subtle.
A somewhat profane word now and again.
A dirty joke every once in a while.
But it got worse.
I lost interest in what I used to enjoy.
Clean jokes lost their humor.
Fortunately, this was only at school.
However, like all beasts, it can not be contained forever.
Soon, a profane word reached home.
I thought nothing of it.
I didn't do anything about it.
I just let it happen.
Soon, it got worse.
My behavior is violent.
My humor is perverted.
Then, I take a look in the mirror.
I see me.
The real me.
And I know I have to do something.
With God as my witness, I WILL fight the snake.
| On October 7th 2008 ItJustHurts14 Said : | |
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wow this is deep, it shows the flip side of things, i guess you could say it that way |
| On June 10th 2008 apstolicwwjd Said : | |
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Could you read my poems and tell me what you think?
apostolicwwjd |
| On June 10th 2008 apstolicwwjd Said : | |
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Very good I love poetry that makes you think...
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| On June 2nd 2008 kissofasia Said : | |
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This is awesome and i see it in a deeper meaning..... |
| On February 25th 2008 williamscott7 Said : | |
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I know God has a sence of humor! Just look at the Duck Billed Platapus! |
| On February 25th 2008 tyiqoqibfiobao Said : | |
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personally though i think go has a sense of humor though and would be upset if u have one about even profane things at times i mean honestly have u seen a hippo tell me that wasnt a joke lol |
| On February 25th 2008 tyiqoqibfiobao Said : | |
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its good our beliefs are the only thing we can truely control in this world and realizing what they are and mantaining them is also one of the hardest things to do |
| On February 12th 2008 unreal1298 Said : | |
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Wow, this is a great poem! I wonder why i didn't notice this before... |
| On February 4th 2008 lovsaboy Said : | |
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deep |
| On February 4th 2008 beautyisthewol Said : | |
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this is me. |


