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A Friend and Suicide
Caught up in your looks. As you hide shyly behind you books. To scared to speak. Closed up for about a week. No one to talk to. No one who cares. No one to love you. You know none if this is fair. You cry every night, so you don't cry during the day. Locked up inside, you think of god and pray. Found yourself with a blade, threatening to cut your throat. Reading the poem last night that you wrote. Hating the the smell of roses, laying beside you bed. No one will know, unitl morning.. you'll be dead.
This was a poem I wrote for one of my friends. She killed herself last year and put a copy of this in her coffon so it will always be with her. I'll always be with her.
| On October 17th 2007 ilovehp7 Said : | |
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i feel so sorry for u and i wuld hate to go through stuff lke tht |
| On October 13th 2007 alienz13 Said : | |
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thats so sad, was she abused or something? its hard losing a friend so young |
| On October 11th 2007 Brandi8760 Said : | |
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Sorry for your lose. I love the poem though. |
| On October 8th 2007 DrunkenProblem Said : | |
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Aww, I'm so sorry. It must be awful to loose a friend like that. I would cry for a very long time. =[ Great Poem though. =] |
| On October 8th 2007 numbbbb0z Said : | |
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I appreciate you trying to see things from her point of views, and trying to understand what she went through..But that's a horrible thing to write her. Nontheless, I apologize for your loss =[[ I'm sure she's happy to know a caring friend like you tried to see what she went through. |


