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The Kiss
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Created on 8-10-07
Two hearts beating as one, their faces lit up as bright as the sun
Theirhands slowly meet, As their hearts skipped a beat
They get lost in each others eyes, As if they were waiting for a surprise
They fall in love with each other, As their faces slowly move closer together
They close their eyes, To complete a perfect kiss
They both know that this will be a memory that they'll miss
As they kiss, She simply makes a wish, A wish for him to love her, For him to wait for her, For him to some day marry her
she loved that boy so much, When she moved away she would long for his touch
She simply wondered if he made a wish too, because after they kissed he said "Baby I love You"
Please Login to post comments| On September 8th 2007 mypoeticrage Said : | |
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I like this one alot. |
| On September 7th 2007 wchocolate07 Said : | |
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Michael came up with the ending of the poem... |
| On September 7th 2007 wchocolate07 Said : | |
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Ha I wrote this poem while I was on the phone with me best guyfriend, Michael Austin. mmmm, he is a fine Oreo!!! lol |
| On August 20th 2007 pinkchickemma Said : | |
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really good and really sweet =] |
| On August 15th 2007 blackangel153 Said : | |
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awwwwwwwwwwwwwww thats so sweet |
