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Created:
08/02 2007
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276
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Blindness
She can see the sun
But not the moon
You could walk right by her
And she wouldn't see you
She can't see a ciggarette
But she can see her cats
But please don't dispair
Shes just blind as a bat
Flick her off
And she wouldn't know
But almost everyday
Off to church she goes
My mom is leagally blind........she asked me to write a poem but she never said she wanted it to be serious......this is what came out........I like it
| On February 6th 2008 fawzia11 Said: |
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| This is nice! |
| On September 20th 2007 Purpledcow Said: |
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| Wonderful! |
| On August 9th 2007 luckysgirl1104 Said: |
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| My grandpa was blind so I really relate. Great poem. |
| On August 2nd 2007 jotoge Said: |
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| haha great! |
| On August 2nd 2007 chrissey08h2 Said: |
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| such good inspiration |
| On August 2nd 2007 CassieZ Said: |
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| nice |
| On August 2nd 2007 babycrzzy Said: |
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| excellent poem but it sad someone would flick her off like a flea:( I really like the poem though |
| On August 2nd 2007 corinne004 Said: |
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| In love with this. Your mom must be a wonderful woman to ask you to write this and give you such creative, humorous freedom. |
| On August 2nd 2007 MoOnZoMbIe Said: |
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| thats kinda pitiful...my heart goes out to your mom..excellent [[two thumbs wayy up]] |
| On August 2nd 2007 undiie Said: |
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| Hah. Its nice. |
| On August 2nd 2007 tswieberg Said: |
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| lol....I love it. |


