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Created: 08/02 2007
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Blindness

She can see the sun

But not the moon

You could walk right by her

And she wouldn't see you

She can't see a ciggarette

But she can see her cats

But please don't dispair

Shes just blind as a bat

Flick her off

And she wouldn't know

But almost everyday

Off to church she goes

 

 

My mom is leagally blind........she asked me to write a poem but she never said she wanted it to be serious......this is what came out........I like it

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On February 6th 2008 fawzia11 Said: 
fawzia11 This is nice!
On September 20th 2007 Purpledcow Said: 
Purpledcow Wonderful!
On August 9th 2007 luckysgirl1104 Said: 
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My grandpa was blind so I really relate. Great poem.
On August 2nd 2007 jotoge Said: 
jotoge haha great!
On August 2nd 2007 chrissey08h2 Said: 
chrissey08h2 such good inspiration
On August 2nd 2007 CassieZ Said: 
CassieZ nice
On August 2nd 2007 babycrzzy Said: 
babycrzzy excellent poem but it sad someone would flick her off like a flea:( I really like the poem though
On August 2nd 2007 corinne004 Said: 
corinne004 In love with this. Your mom must be a wonderful woman to ask you to write this and give you such creative, humorous freedom.
On August 2nd 2007 MoOnZoMbIe Said: 
MoOnZoMbIe thats kinda pitiful...my heart goes out to your mom..excellent [[two thumbs wayy up]]
On August 2nd 2007 undiie Said: 
undiie Hah. Its nice.
On August 2nd 2007 tswieberg Said: 
tswieberg lol....I love it.