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I never liked how this turned out.......

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Created: 07/30 2007
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Category: Worry

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Paul's Poem

I lay awake thinking at night
Of My brother who gave me a terrrible fright
I asked him not to go and join the force
Although I pleaded he didn't listen of course
I can understand where he is coming from
For the Army has chosen a great sum
And in that great sum lies a family friend
I fear they won't come home in the end
I don't want to say good-bye to him
In fear he won't say hi again
So if you're really going
At least leave me hoping
And say c-ya-later
And I will feel better
Good-bye means the ending
And hello the beginning
C-ya-later is in between
So say it and remember me

 

 

I never liked how this turned out..but i couldn't bring myself to change it.....

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On September 29th 2007 pru1989 Said: 
pru1989 no i think this is good u know sometimes u cant controll your thought path is he safe?????
On August 1st 2007 jotoge Said: 
jotoge another good piece
On July 30th 2007 tswieberg Said: 
tswieberg This is really good...I don't understand why you don't like it. Great job.
On July 30th 2007 ANNO22 Said: 
ANNO22 that is an awesome poem
On July 30th 2007 babycrzzy Said: 
babycrzzy wow i like this especially the ending.