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a song.......maybeRate this Poem
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Plea
You're like my shield
Protecting me from
Everything I feel
You're like my rock
When i'm with you
I don't touch the clock
When you're around time stands still
And when i'm with you
I know its for real
And I wonder what can I do
What can I do to believe in you
What can you do to let me know
That you won't hit me and let the marks show
What can you do to reassure me
That one day you won't up and leave me
You're like my shield
Protecting me from
Everything I feel
You're like my rock
When i'm with you
I don't touch the clock
When you're around time stands still
And when i'm with you
I know its for real
So this is my one last plea
Try as you might not to hurt me
I've been beaten, and burned, and torchered too
And I don't want to go through that with you
You're like my shield
Protecting me from
Everything I feel
You're like my rock
When i'm with you
I don't touch the clock
When you're around time stands still
And when i'm with you
I know its for real
Open your arms and welcome me
Say that you care and that you love me
Author's note............I will more than likely take this and tweek with it a little to make it just a poem.....i don't know if i like it as a song........
Please Login to post comments| On September 29th 2007 pru1989 Said: |
| i understand this 300% still ur brillent:) |
| On July 28th 2007 babycrzzy Said: |
| i really like this poem and it's be great to see what u do to it:D |
| On July 28th 2007 tswieberg Said: |
| I really like it...I would love to see you work on it some more and turn it into a poem as well as a song. |
| On July 28th 2007 chocohott Said: |
| idk, i like it as a song and as a poem, but if ur gonna keep it as a song the verses need to be a bit longer and so does the chorus, but other than that it was fantastic!! :) |
