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a poem i wrote just on a whim

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Torn

Views (42) Other Created on 6-13-07 Flag
so lost
torn between two
having one
but not the other
wanting what you can't have,
it can tear you apart.
leave you broken,
confused,
and hurting.

hmm ,
but you only live once,
go for what fullfils you more,
even if it means sacrificing everything.
because in the end
that'll be more satisfying
than missing out on your desires.

the desires
that you will regret
and end up
constantly contemplating your failure.
until it tears you apart.
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On June 14th 2007 Jarrettsdance Said :
Jarrettsdance i'm in a bad situation which this is describing, this is good advice