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I feel your hand in mine,I know our life together is beginning tonight.
I can't wait for us to be as one, and
for these feelings to grow,
into what we can become.
I know that you are what I want,
that you are what I need to keep me strong.
I am so lucky to have this opportunity,
and I won't waste a second of it.
I feel your hand in mine, and that is all I need.
| On August 15th 2007 PoeticPang Said : | |
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^___^ very sweet,,, adorable loveliness,,, i like the flow and the way u've structured the lines into one another,, made things feel sooo,, ehm,, hmmmmm.... together.. ^__^,, wonderful job!~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~Pang |
| On August 12th 2007 tswieberg Said : | |
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This is really sweet. I like the stlye. Nice poem. |


