Paradise ?

He said " Come into thiswonderful land" ,

He told me " This is as nice as it gets" ,

I followed him as I gazed at the sun

Dawning and dawning ever more  .

I took a look at springs of glissing  water ,

As if I've never seen it  before ,

The air so precious with lively- hood , 

I gazed as I took in the sights ,

Such a wonderful place to be .

Then standing there as I looked over the edge,

I noticed something very  intreging ,

At the edge of the cliff ,

I could not believe my eyes .

A edge so sharp its a mirror reflection ,

As I look to see the true background ,

Behind the border lays the eye of

              ?! Paradise !? 

By Vivia G. Thompson ( this was written 3 years ago when I was little )