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this verson kinda funny but still seriou

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Still Alive

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It was the day before yesrterday

When my hands were smeared in blood

I'd thought for it was my time

But god loves me so much

I'm sorry for the life thats taken

Even tho I have been shaken 

Shaken to the core

I'm glad I'm still alive

Still alive to smell sweet candy

Like sugar dandy  tangerine

It taste like what it seems

Still alive to see 

All the things in my dream

Like the awsome technology I will have

When I make this dream come true

Still here to hear the sound of my ipod/mp3

To hear the sound of my favorite song 

That makes me so glad so colorfull inside

Still alive to taste still alive to touch

Eat my favorite food

And feel myself blush

I'm so happy so happy I am

Still alive , still alive to feel

Still alive to feel my pulse

Still alive to feel my heart beat

For not just yesterday

My hands were

Covered  in

Blood  

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On February 5th 2008 vanique Said :
vanique tried to rhyme I hate ryhming but at least tried