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Views (167) Passion Created on 5-16-07 Flag

While in the shadow of greatness, passion is expected.

Passion to achieve, passion to fail, even passion to not care if you're rejected.

Because ones' character is achieved through adversity they've faced;

Whether you've failed miserably, or succeeded; Did you deem yourself a disgrace?

 It's not your trials that define you, but how you face the facts.

Will you dance around the issue, or launch a full-on attack?

The choice is yours to make, and in my case I will be:

A wonderful husband, amazing father, and a fireman in the Marines. 

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On July 15th 2007 fgggfx Said :
fgggfx wow, amazing poem. slightly intense and deep with great rythem
On June 19th 2007 e2bella Said :
e2bella Great work. I like it.
On May 16th 2007 kimberly10520 Said :
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That was Awesome i couldnt have said it better my self!!
On May 16th 2007 aajjvv Said :
aajjvv i wanna be a fireman too mate, good luck with everythin, nice poem
On May 16th 2007 lavonea Said :
lavonea nice job! i liked it
On May 16th 2007 ausjo Said :
ausjo Nice work!