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This has to do with something in my lifeRate this Poem
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Without You
I feel so weak and lonely and cold
I can't reach you and feel your hold
Please don't leave me in this world forever
My mom is seperating us now but not forever
Don't die on me, I love you so
That's why I write about you, so that you can know
You're on my mind, day and night
Now matter where I am, in the dark or light
I want to hold you so tight to me
And take you away so we can both be free
Because, I am dead without you...
| On July 10th 2008 UnSane420 Said : | |
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this is so amazing i love it! |
| On May 25th 2008 Thugnastay227 Said : | |
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ow wow celina...did u write this that night? i hope u have him read this....very emotional. |
| On May 22nd 2008 lexiigurl345 Said : | |
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man i could never imagine me witout my man now that iv read this ik how id feal |
| On May 22nd 2008 deadpoet Said : | |
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i think quite a few teenagers can relate, maybe even adults. this poem was good (check out one of my new ones if ya dont mind) |
| On May 22nd 2008 xHickChick789x Said : | |
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Great work! I like this one |


