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Without You

Views (68) Pain Created on 5-22-08 Flag

I feel so weak and lonely and cold

I can't reach you and feel your hold

Please don't leave me in this world forever

My mom is seperating us now but not forever

Don't die on me, I love you so

That's why I write about you, so that you can know

You're on my mind, day and night

Now matter where I am, in the dark or light

I want to hold you so tight to me

And take you away so we can both be free

Because, I am dead without you... 

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On July 10th 2008 UnSane420 Said :
UnSane420 this is so amazing i love it!
On May 25th 2008 Thugnastay227 Said :
Thugnastay227 ow wow celina...did u write this that night? i hope u have him read this....very emotional.
On May 22nd 2008 lexiigurl345 Said :
lexiigurl345 man i could never imagine me witout my man now that iv read this ik how id feal
On May 22nd 2008 deadpoet Said :
deadpoet i think quite a few teenagers can relate, maybe even adults. this poem was good (check out one of my new ones if ya dont mind)
On May 22nd 2008 xHickChick789x Said :
xHickChick789x Great work! I like this one