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Raindrops

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Raindrops trickle down the window glass

Just like her tears that she lets fall pass

Why does she feel so dead

Just like a gold fish who has not fed

Her heartbeat slowly dies

As you sit there and watch as she tries

For you are useless to save thee

So just go hang yourself on a tree

So you can die along with her

And you can try to be together

As long as you don't go to burn

Because now it's your turn

To suffer what she has suffered for years... 

 

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On June 8th 2008 ridinbitch0807 Said :
ridinbitch0807 i like it. very good job
On May 17th 2008 kissofasia Said :
kissofasia I remember my mother.I love it.
On May 16th 2008 lexiigurl345 Said :
lexiigurl345 i love the frazing and if what the other ppl say is true and this isnt your best then u must be pretty fukking good
On May 16th 2008 JAiDyLeE Said :
JAiDyLeE I love it
On May 15th 2008 101091 Said :
101091 I like it
On May 14th 2008 UnSane420 Said :
UnSane420 its a little depression but awesome none the less i love it 2 thumbs up!
On May 14th 2008 Thugnastay227 Said :
Thugnastay227 i wont lie to u hun...it isnt bad...however i know u have the potential for far greater stuff. u never cease to impress me..i eargerly await ur next installment.
On May 14th 2008 xHickChick789x Said :
xHickChick789x very good
On May 14th 2008 KazWolf Said :
KazWolf i liked it...
On May 14th 2008 vampirefreak61 Said :
vampirefreak61 meh, not my best but not bad