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Just seemed interetsting to me.Rate this Poem
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Raindrops
Raindrops trickle down the window glass
Just like her tears that she lets fall pass
Why does she feel so dead
Just like a gold fish who has not fed
Her heartbeat slowly dies
As you sit there and watch as she tries
For you are useless to save thee
So just go hang yourself on a tree
So you can die along with her
And you can try to be together
As long as you don't go to burn
Because now it's your turn
To suffer what she has suffered for years...
| On June 8th 2008 ridinbitch0807 Said : | |
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i like it. very good job |
| On May 17th 2008 kissofasia Said : | |
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I remember my mother.I love it. |
| On May 16th 2008 lexiigurl345 Said : | |
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i love the frazing and if what the other ppl say is true and this isnt your best then u must be pretty fukking good |
| On May 16th 2008 JAiDyLeE Said : | |
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I love it |
| On May 15th 2008 101091 Said : | |
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I like it |
| On May 14th 2008 UnSane420 Said : | |
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its a little depression but awesome none the less i love it 2 thumbs up! |
| On May 14th 2008 Thugnastay227 Said : | |
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i wont lie to u hun...it isnt bad...however i know u have the potential for far greater stuff. u never cease to impress me..i eargerly await ur next installment. |
| On May 14th 2008 xHickChick789x Said : | |
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very good |
| On May 14th 2008 KazWolf Said : | |
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i liked it... |
| On May 14th 2008 vampirefreak61 Said : | |
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meh, not my best but not bad |


