vampirefreak61

This is how i feel at school

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Demon Within

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Created on 5-13-08

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Surrounded by people who don't care

I'm telling you, it isn't fair

I just want to yell

Why must i be in this hell

These people all asume

That i'm relaxed in this room

But in a dream i am full of rage

You just want to turn the page

Because the demon within has awoken

And now, your life is broken

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On May 17th 2008 kissofasia Said :

	believe me sometimes,i feel the same way.

On May 14th 2008 UnSane420 Said :

	this is awesome i love it i think the shortness of it gives it more emotion its like your fed up and thats all you have to say...i like it very much!

On May 14th 2008 ridinbitch0807 Said :

	short, sweet straight to the point and full of emotion. i love it!

On May 14th 2008 MellowK Said :

	And Agreed with deadpoet THERE RIGHT ON!

On May 14th 2008 MellowK Said :

	School I Don't Believe In It. Sorry You Have To Deal With The Dreadful Hell High

On May 13th 2008 deadpoet Said :

	yeah people can be assholes especially kids at school, but trust me there's always gonna be one if not more people that care. and sometimes thats all we ever need, of course we hunger and fiend and want more but, at least there's always going to be one person that cares and loves us (God) if you dont believe in him then im sure you'll always have at least one friend who will care. keep your head up ;) (good poem)

On May 13th 2008 Thugnastay227 Said :

	awwwwww people care. i promise u. huggles.

On May 13th 2008 xHickChick789x Said :

	short and simply love it... pretty deep in a way